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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Something Light For a Change!

Three daring and headstrong young lasses
Failed to heed the advice of the masses
Who warned, "The ice is too thin!"
And so they fell in
Getting soaked from their hats to their asses!

submitted for Mag 49
 
Thanks to Jingle for the awards!




19 comments:

Martin H. said...

And they would have taken some time to dry out!

Lyn said...

You sure tell it like it is!! Fun...

thingy said...

haha! They didn't have asses back then. They weren't allowed.

Helen said...

ho, ho, ho ... this is too funny!

coalblack said...

*snort!*

love it

Reflections said...

Perfect! and how long it would be before this passes...

The Reason You Come said...

Heh. You'd think their petticoats would save them, eh? ;)

williewizzy said...

HAHAHA... this is really funny! Nicely done :)

Jinksy said...

Yay! Good one - I wish I'd written it myself! LOL

Tess Kincaid said...

Heehee!! Good one, Mouse.

Jingle said...

Getting soaked from their hats to their asses!


what a hit, love your take.
Happy Writing.

Lolamouse said...

Thanks all for the happy comments! I needed some cheer this week : )

lynnaima said...

Nice piece and quite enjoyable

buttercup600 said...

LOL...just what I needed...so funny!! I loved it, well crafted poem my friend. oxo

hedgewitch said...

They must have had some stalwart menfolks to haul out those fifty pound soaking wet skirts. Nice and light hearted mag.

Sue J said...

Ha Ha!! Nice one!

poetpeteet said...

What hats,so far from their asses!Thanks for the laugh!

Cad said...

The best I've seen this week!

trollpants said...

Very funny. Thanks!