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The lightning's skeletal fingers
pointed down at us
The thunder accused
"Sin! Sin!! SIN!!!"
We watched the storm
through the moon roof
Seats leaned all the way back
Pretending
we were comfortable
Searching
in the darkness
Sometimes a car
isn't the safest place
in a storm.
submitted to Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Road Trip
7 comments:
Not the safest, but then, that is sometimes most of the attraction. Perfect capture of a vehicular moment, LM, and I'm left with that old Meatloaf song earworming in my head, even if sin and skeletons do take the fun out of paradise.
We watched the storm
through the moon roof
Seats leaned all the way back...
Such an amazing moment captured here.
Pretending we were comfortable.... ha, I love it.
There were storms inside and outside the car. :) Great capture of a "vehicular moment" as hedgewitch so aptly stated.
the best poems are about "moments" IMO - not sure if you were safer in or out of the car :)
Oh a moment pretending to be comfortable.. I love that.
Haaaa!!!! Those cars were romance, lust and sex all wrapped up in one (all three coming within seconds of each other sometimes!!!) what a lovely way to watch the storm. Just sayin'. Thanks for writing for the prompt, it was awesome as always!
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