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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Thursday, January 30, 2014

Tweets

You are as deep as
my dog's water bowl
I looked into your eyes
and saw eye
No more.

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Lunch today with Mom
I had the Cobb salad
She ate my soul
Left a mess and
no tip
What a bitch.

submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Words Count with MZ, Twitter Poetry

11 comments:

Marcoantonio Arellano said...

wow. love these two. the second one is a wow wow!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Ouch! These are tweets with claws!

Mama Zen said...

That second one could not be more perfect. Love!

Helen said...

Brilliant tweets! Thought-provoking too.

Fireblossom said...

Your mom and my mom should have lunch and see who wins. Of course, they'd probably be sweet as pie to an outsider!

hedgewitch said...

Love them both--but the second one is one to which I can relate. You are really sharp and classy here, LM, even with claws on.

grapeling said...

ha! ouch! ~

Ella said...

Miss Mouse please stay away from the Owl and the Pussycat-they are not your friends!

Purrfectly done

Margaret said...

She ate my soul… Oh, that was a great one (hope she paid for the lunch!)

Kay L. Davies said...

Ooh, Ms Mouse, you are very much the queen of the evil tweet. Good for you!
K

Helena said...

lol....a mum lunch to avoid - if she lets ya!