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| Scar by ~AnnaMariaDeMari |
Get out
No more chances
Promises, promises
Take your sweet words and choke on them
We're done
Too late
Save the tears to water your lawn
I've cried too much, too long
Without you, babe
I'm strong
submitted for Poets United, Midnight Snack 007
12 comments:
That is so strong and angry!
Very good...
wow...strong words...some of the hardest to admit and say though....
This one means a whole lot to me!!!! I'm strong!
Yes! Great write.
Anna :o]
AMEN! I love this one's voice. LOVE.
Rawr. ;-)
I love this. I wish I had been strong enough to say these words to certain men in my life
I'm sensing a disturbing theme lately. I'm glad I wasn't the one that made you feel that way.
Is this a follow-up? Life goes on with new beginnings and new characters. Hope this piece was cathartic. The heart anguishes, never sated.
So powerful. The words along with the photo makes it dynamite.
powerful.
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keep writing,
lovely talent, smiles.
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