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| image courtesy of Magpie Tales 85 |
You padded in
and touched my heart as quietly
as elephant footsteps
You brought the rain
and washed from me the
smoke and soot that had
I climbed upon your back
together we flew
with the clouds
submitted for Magpie Tales, 85
15 comments:
Lovely and vivid write, Lola. A good one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/
I wish to take this ride with your 'padded' friend, friend.
smiles. as quiet as elephant footsteps...yep...smiles. this is sweet...
Mouse, this is my kind of friend!! Elephant take me away ..........
I'm usually that subtle, myself. An elephant with hobnailed boots.
this brought a smile... :)
This is amazing this is the 3rd poem I have read about elephant having wings and seeing this image excellent poem
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/
Aahhh! That's nice!
Lovely lines lolamouse!
witty words.
fun read.
After reading some heavy duty ones I am enoying the light hearted....
and so to the clouds
Oh I love this - it is so beautiful
touched my heart as quietly
as elephant footsteps
wow
I want to go, too...
Light and beautiful. The miracle of love can lift up heavy hearts just as magical wings can make even an elephant soar!
adore this..x
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