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I was never beautiful
Never swam with the swans
their soft feathers
graceful, white necks blooming with
bright pink buds of
boys' affections
Beautiful girls turned heads
I turned pages of books
My lovers were paper
vellum princes
who didn't mind if the princess was
too fat, too skinny, too, too, too
What if the ugly duckling
never grew into a swan
but into an ugly duck?
Would anyone love it then?
or would it be hung
by its gangly neck
in the window of a Chinese restaurant?
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23 comments:
Mouse, I'm betting you were and are quite beautiful ... your Magpie is lovely and bittersweet.
oy, i sure hope not...as he rubs his neck...
Excellent write lolamouse, and never judge a duck by its feathers for it often hides its beauty beneath.
Anna :o]
"Would anyone love it then?
or would it be hung by its gangly neck
in the window of a Chinese restaurant?"
Still loved, still desired, but in a different way...
awesome write, swans are overrated
YOU WERE (AND ARE) ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL!!!!
I agree with Christine!
Ugly is only another word for beautiful!
Inspired. Wish I'd thought of that line! Well done, you.
Hmmm, some people LOVE ducks (not to mention mice...)! Swans are overrated.
Loved your poem.
I like your transition of "white necks blooming with / bright pink buds of / boys' affections" and the flavours of vellum and gangly.
What a thought. One rarely goes to the darker side of the duckling. Paper princes are sometimes the most romatic.
Your mind is beautiful. Who cares what others really think? With your brains you could buy the restaurant and hang whoever you liked in the window.
And this is why high school reunions are considered the great equalizers. Time has an amazing ability to even the playing field.
GREAT poem.
wow.
love your take, very creatively fun.
Touching and sad, and I agree with Dave (above)
It has been said that beauty is in the eyes of the beholder...beautiful read.
Looks like the lads disagree, Lolamouse. Me too! Great Magpie.
A poignant view of life... many of us ducks can empathise! ♥
I hope not... :(
Cheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
I am very sad for those ducks right now. I've been photographing ducks quite a bit lately and now I don't think I can eat one again for a really long time. It's been a long time already too.
Excellent, effective in its sentiment/s work.
Excellent poem (as always)! I can relate to this so much :p
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