tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post8811503217244646475..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: HoarfrostLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19507598294340284682015-01-18T20:25:24.628-05:002015-01-18T20:25:24.628-05:00Wow...your use of the organic and color to express...Wow...your use of the organic and color to express imagery and emotions of the heart is so effective. Brilliant work, Lolamouse! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-39046014456205678392015-01-16T22:22:30.905-05:002015-01-16T22:22:30.905-05:00Sometimes love dies a slow death...love the visual...Sometimes love dies a slow death...love the visuals in thisSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46239352891733271992015-01-16T15:05:12.021-05:002015-01-16T15:05:12.021-05:00Perfect, painful, and on point from the first word...Perfect, painful, and on point from the first word to the last.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70278719149391093232015-01-16T14:06:45.852-05:002015-01-16T14:06:45.852-05:00What amazes me is how Strawberries can fool you. ...What amazes me is how Strawberries can fool you. I will buy them and think they look fine - and then under my kitchen light I pick them up and they are mushy or moldy underneath… tricky - This poem does a great job describing the slippery slide of a relationship gone sour…Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24874448253562923662015-01-16T12:26:16.836-05:002015-01-16T12:26:16.836-05:00I love this! The image of the heart-strawberry is...I love this! The image of the heart-strawberry is inspired, so unique.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-82495495265457264662015-01-16T11:01:50.692-05:002015-01-16T11:01:50.692-05:00PerfectionPerfectionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33074588043311953092015-01-16T08:30:04.975-05:002015-01-16T08:30:04.975-05:00You hit a lot of high notes in this one, LM, but t...You hit a lot of high notes in this one, LM, but the whole thing is so smoothly made that no one note kicks any other's butt(as it were) but all gang up on the reader to crystallize a mood and a perfect image at the end. Really well done, really liked it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-49839112779232059892015-01-16T02:03:09.531-05:002015-01-16T02:03:09.531-05:00I love the play on white and red which culminates ...I love the play on white and red which culminates in your excellent simile.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75926416806362242112015-01-15T23:30:55.951-05:002015-01-15T23:30:55.951-05:00What a great parallel - the moldy strawberry and t...What a great parallel - the moldy strawberry and the hoarfrost - and all packaged into a metaphor for life itself. Bravo brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-8295276354476041142015-01-15T23:02:42.397-05:002015-01-15T23:02:42.397-05:00That strawberry said it all for me--summer, fall a...That strawberry said it all for me--summer, fall and winter--the landscape of a heart.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24818503122244610672015-01-15T22:09:25.288-05:002015-01-15T22:09:25.288-05:00So, vivid is your red and the hoarfrost~
Bravo!So, vivid is your red and the hoarfrost~<br />Bravo!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-36951137581614308622015-01-15T18:32:22.421-05:002015-01-15T18:32:22.421-05:00Hoarfrost has a life of its own in nature. I love...Hoarfrost has a life of its own in nature. I love the way you described and compared it here. Great write!Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11703246997993841902015-01-15T17:59:30.013-05:002015-01-15T17:59:30.013-05:00Oh I so get that....the activity, and the delayed ...Oh I so get that....the activity, and the delayed noticing of the hoarfrost around one's heart. I love the word hoarfrost.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com