tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post8642839085752385602..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Distance = Pace X TimeLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-7073460972884034732013-07-27T17:01:17.589-04:002013-07-27T17:01:17.589-04:00Some choice lines that hurdled me back. One in par...Some choice lines that hurdled me back. One in particular:<br /><br />"Curious fury stilled"<br /><br />Enjoyed.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-13517395861234410882013-07-27T03:48:37.115-04:002013-07-27T03:48:37.115-04:00you have captured all the nuances of this tender r...you have captured all the nuances of this tender rite of passage with the lightest touch of words and depth of images.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84945829553343884792013-07-27T01:50:42.558-04:002013-07-27T01:50:42.558-04:00I think she should be happy that she was timid whe...I think she should be happy that she was timid when others were bold.<br />Hard at the time thoughnot displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-40268439583432189012013-07-26T12:55:04.410-04:002013-07-26T12:55:04.410-04:00Interesting and well written, mi amiga, to entice ...Interesting and well written, mi amiga, to entice and surprise at the endMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-59198923736759064882013-07-25T23:50:09.875-04:002013-07-25T23:50:09.875-04:00Great piece! There is such harsh pain and reality ...Great piece! There is such harsh pain and reality in it. Wow!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33828048094446252582013-07-25T18:42:05.918-04:002013-07-25T18:42:05.918-04:00I love your poem~ It is painful and so vivid-raw n...I love your poem~ It is painful and so vivid-raw n' real!<br /><br />I can't believe we both wrote<br />curious fury?! whoa...<br /><br /><br /><br />Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-16235682683874742792013-07-25T17:57:51.276-04:002013-07-25T17:57:51.276-04:00Wow what a story ~ Sometimes being not typical has...Wow what a story ~ Sometimes being not typical has its rewards and obstacles ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75895429148371972222013-07-25T17:39:15.617-04:002013-07-25T17:39:15.617-04:00Beginning so beguiling, and then the grit at end. ...Beginning so beguiling, and then the grit at end. Dang. I like that the speaker is NOT typical... but hopefully not forever a maiden aunt. Thanks for contributing this, Lola Mouse. ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-14475809042137733462013-07-25T17:11:32.629-04:002013-07-25T17:11:32.629-04:00ouch, felt...there was a nice heat building til th...ouch, felt...there was a nice heat building til the bucket of ice water hit...from the growl to the grit...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com