tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post7565454551610948012..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Door Step BoysLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19720185513660052682012-04-15T09:31:08.383-04:002012-04-15T09:31:08.383-04:00You made me want to know their story...You made me want to know their story...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10078860805795279592012-04-13T11:07:25.603-04:002012-04-13T11:07:25.603-04:00Wow! Like the man said, "It's not how you...Wow! Like the man said, "It's not how you feel, it's how look that matters!"<br />Another great one...Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-9340651784916350772012-04-13T11:07:25.338-04:002012-04-13T11:07:25.338-04:00Wow! Like the man said, "It's not how you...Wow! Like the man said, "It's not how you feel, it's how look that matters!"<br />Another great one...Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78339566829755663712012-04-12T14:16:06.087-04:002012-04-12T14:16:06.087-04:00Oh, Mouse...deliciously snarky-- especially the en...Oh, Mouse...deliciously snarky-- especially the ending!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-44389510759238328102012-04-12T09:03:42.756-04:002012-04-12T09:03:42.756-04:00Sad ...good capture.Sad ...good capture.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33516893270323550442012-04-11T23:41:04.584-04:002012-04-11T23:41:04.584-04:00Wow. That guy's outfit is really something. ...Wow. That guy's outfit is really something. We all do a lot to feel fashionable, cool, popular, pretty... your poem says it all much better than I am right now. Great write. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-76333962827259829012012-04-11T19:34:13.042-04:002012-04-11T19:34:13.042-04:00Interesting picture. Are these guys a common fixtu...Interesting picture. Are these guys a common fixture around those parts? This is the first I have heard of them. I really loved the following lines:<br /><br />Pissing desperation<br />on the sidewalk with the<br />cigarette butts<br /><br />Great way to depict young braggadocio mixed with such teenage angst.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86186247625367175372012-04-11T18:39:17.054-04:002012-04-11T18:39:17.054-04:00PS--just wondering if the Door Step Boys know the ...PS--just wondering if the Door Step Boys know the West End Girls?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-61577295948580318212012-04-11T11:13:19.467-04:002012-04-11T11:13:19.467-04:00I am so happy I am not a young person in this day ...I am so happy I am not a young person in this day and age. It really has to be rough to fit in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-44170414213024298302012-04-11T10:07:02.075-04:002012-04-11T10:07:02.075-04:00Pissing desperation on the sidewalk ha ha ha...yea...Pissing desperation on the sidewalk ha ha ha...yeah- i know the kind of people you are talking about...it must take such energy to be THAT competative...this was a cool write- i liked the dry sarcasm that dripped all over this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-2757328734368583962012-04-11T09:53:00.705-04:002012-04-11T09:53:00.705-04:00They almost make you want to point and laugh, don&...They almost make you want to point and laugh, don't they? I was never one of the pretty ones so I can do that.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-37119099149963058932012-04-11T08:40:15.179-04:002012-04-11T08:40:15.179-04:00kinda sadkinda sadWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71580321551825363482012-04-11T06:45:08.541-04:002012-04-11T06:45:08.541-04:00That last line stings ~ I recall seeing them on ...That last line stings ~ I recall seeing them on the city streets ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25123390228974656842012-04-11T00:49:25.392-04:002012-04-11T00:49:25.392-04:00My favorite is "pissing out desperation on th...My favorite is "pissing out desperation on the sidewalk with the cigarette butts."<br /><br />I like how this poem could be about teenage clique girls, but it seems much darker when its about boys.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-74265092185529643582012-04-11T00:17:16.720-04:002012-04-11T00:17:16.720-04:00Ha...I now some of these....alot of these...mostly...Ha...I now some of these....alot of these...mostly these...lol. That last line hits the nail on the head..."girl, don't make me come over there"...great writing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71056276404901538032012-04-10T23:45:51.357-04:002012-04-10T23:45:51.357-04:00great description of shallow people!!
messy littl...great description of shallow people!!<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/07/09/messy-little-girl/" rel="nofollow">messy little girl</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-13057449214540887662012-04-10T22:57:43.562-04:002012-04-10T22:57:43.562-04:00This a part of city life that you describe well. g...This a part of city life that you describe well. good Job<br />http://leah-jamielynn.typepad.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33941017168921779052012-04-10T22:55:49.942-04:002012-04-10T22:55:49.942-04:00if you got to try that hard to be pretty....or to ...if you got to try that hard to be pretty....or to get attention...there is a whole other part to the story...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-34021032374933068042012-04-10T22:55:34.760-04:002012-04-10T22:55:34.760-04:00if you got to try that hard to be pretty....or to ...if you got to try that hard to be pretty....or to get attention...there is a whole other part to the story...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-60234581319947293962012-04-10T22:29:35.755-04:002012-04-10T22:29:35.755-04:00So much in your poem. "Pissing desperation o...So much in your poem. "Pissing desperation on the sidewalk." A slice of life.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52204681048996175262012-04-10T22:22:03.501-04:002012-04-10T22:22:03.501-04:00It's a jungle out there! t least they realize ...It's a jungle out there! t least they realize what's really important!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com