tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post975113105154255557..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: On Uncovering an EarthwormLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-30576252291401993532013-04-14T18:33:05.376-04:002013-04-14T18:33:05.376-04:00I absolutely adore this poem - especially "I ...I absolutely adore this poem - especially "I had the weirdest dream". Love it, Lolamouse!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-30063027250084219682013-04-14T11:02:19.527-04:002013-04-14T11:02:19.527-04:00right on, the earthworm would TOTALLY say WTF, hum...right on, the earthworm would TOTALLY say WTF, human?Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-29624625504170018462013-04-14T01:22:09.749-04:002013-04-14T01:22:09.749-04:00I love the narrative properties here and the beaut...I love the narrative properties here and the beautiful description of yellow.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33287394785160139652013-04-14T00:07:45.864-04:002013-04-14T00:07:45.864-04:00Right in the spirit of Collins, the punch line, th...Right in the spirit of Collins, the punch line, the humor within the ordinary. You nailed it, Lola. Soon I will be digging, and I hope I don't spade any worms in half, such a drag. Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35514907341511879702013-04-13T23:16:35.918-04:002013-04-13T23:16:35.918-04:00Hahaha - that's a fun one!Hahaha - that's a fun one!<br />Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-7439014373694182282013-04-13T22:59:37.414-04:002013-04-13T22:59:37.414-04:00I LOVE him!!! You did an awesome job with this...s...I LOVE him!!! You did an awesome job with this...smiling here..."What the hell??!" Love that!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-30632373645711852752013-04-13T21:35:33.714-04:002013-04-13T21:35:33.714-04:00Ha! Sleepy earthworm would not have liked the slee...Ha! Sleepy earthworm would not have liked the sleet we had here today.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-81889196156952698192013-04-13T19:48:27.907-04:002013-04-13T19:48:27.907-04:00Oh, you make me feel sorry for the worm, as you wi...Oh, you make me feel sorry for the worm, as you will see when you read my submission. (Pink!)<br />An excellent challenge, Ms Mouse. It took me a long time to decide what to do.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-2291227591669991852013-04-13T16:47:05.111-04:002013-04-13T16:47:05.111-04:00ha what a fun write...and interesting thought as w...ha what a fun write...and interesting thought as well as to what an earthworm might think of us stealing its blanket...smiles....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-69119204379478246502013-04-13T16:38:16.585-04:002013-04-13T16:38:16.585-04:00If I walk outside right now, read your poem to the...If I walk outside right now, read your poem to the skies ... will Spring arrive? It's worth a try. Loved this Mouse!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-27670369883679302702013-04-13T16:20:36.156-04:002013-04-13T16:20:36.156-04:00This made me smile! I love how you turned it abou...This made me smile! I love how you turned it about...<br />I need to try this again!<br />Bravo Miss MouseEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-72410333543707069142013-04-13T15:42:33.479-04:002013-04-13T15:42:33.479-04:00I love that colors announce themselves with exclam...I love that colors announce themselves with exclamation points. Such a darling ending!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-48621262914703167202013-04-13T14:20:37.931-04:002013-04-13T14:20:37.931-04:00I love the colors of spring, yellow with exclamati...I love the colors of spring, yellow with exclamation points ~<br /><br />The earthworm story is delightful, ha, ha ~ Perhaps he did ~<br /><br />Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-59965814507436663732013-04-13T13:29:56.667-04:002013-04-13T13:29:56.667-04:00This is so cute and funny! It makes me want to go ...This is so cute and funny! It makes me want to go outside and garden a bit.Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84622026210303622672013-04-13T13:12:04.146-04:002013-04-13T13:12:04.146-04:00Oh, I love the ending. You cleverly swapped the vi...Oh, I love the ending. You cleverly swapped the viewpoint there from poet to subject - something Billy Collins does so skillfully. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com