tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post7531874573623567000..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: His BouquetLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35670405972703755762013-01-26T12:59:14.618-05:002013-01-26T12:59:14.618-05:00I'm in AWE!! This is first rate all the way.I'm in AWE!! This is first rate all the way. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22854907385947194222013-01-26T12:37:37.916-05:002013-01-26T12:37:37.916-05:00I can so see that becoming a hit.
very sad and lo...I can so see that becoming a hit.<br /><br />very sad and lovely, dear.<br /><br />Thank you.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-16592152160826208042013-01-26T04:25:14.075-05:002013-01-26T04:25:14.075-05:00Always so beautiful to visit you in the early morn...Always so beautiful to visit you in the early morning.<br /><br />*bloom in his bouquet*<br />Brilliant!<br /><br />*hugs*<br />MimiMimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-49879249419973204612013-01-26T01:38:54.844-05:002013-01-26T01:38:54.844-05:00Beautiful photos..."you're a bloom in his...Beautiful photos..."you're a bloom in his bouquet...fed you lies like water" Damn that happens too often. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-63186132169427817912013-01-25T22:18:58.331-05:002013-01-25T22:18:58.331-05:00You are so good! I'm loving your work. I'm...You are so good! I'm loving your work. I'm finding more and more that the more I rhyme, the better control I have over my poems. They tend to get away from me and go a little more than crazy. ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-60016297810407565462013-01-25T19:34:47.106-05:002013-01-25T19:34:47.106-05:00A love song as in an open your eyes song seems tot...A love song as in an open your eyes song seems totally right for this prompt. I've listened to a few of her songs today and like how you've matched the non-compromising strength of her vision with your own.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-74929083831201263792013-01-25T18:11:52.076-05:002013-01-25T18:11:52.076-05:00"You cannot stem the withering"...super ..."You cannot stem the withering"...super poem, Ms Mouse, love the double entendre above.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21238889067801996102013-01-25T16:11:37.645-05:002013-01-25T16:11:37.645-05:00Wonderful poem--so sad a story. The pictures go wi...Wonderful poem--so sad a story. The pictures go with the poem so well--in kind of a creepy way actually. LOL No, I do like the pictures.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22469536987449472172013-01-25T15:07:45.569-05:002013-01-25T15:07:45.569-05:00nice..this has a really cool rhythm...and great ph...nice..this has a really cool rhythm...and great phrasing too...looks like your poem has been quoted back to you already so i will abstain...smiles...def one i would not mind hearing to see if your attitude matched the one i read it with...ha...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-77103963086743025212013-01-25T14:10:37.952-05:002013-01-25T14:10:37.952-05:00Yeah, you did!! You rocked this!
I love this:
&q...Yeah, you did!! You rocked this!<br /><br />I love this:<br /><br />"You’re addicted to his gentleness<br />You love it when he’s rough<br />The sky is bluer when you kiss<br />You just can’t get enough"<br /><br />the kiss and just...I love how they play! <br /><br />Images are amazing here...perfect fit!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-67537204253573470562013-01-25T13:56:22.343-05:002013-01-25T13:56:22.343-05:00gosh, i really want to hear you sing or speak this...gosh, i really want to hear you sing or speak this!! it's fantastic.<br />this verse in particular, i love:<br />"But you can’t see you’re dying<br />There is less of you each day<br />Better heed what I’m implying<br />You’re a bloom in his bouquet"<br />yes!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-43806376356814689462013-01-25T13:51:18.324-05:002013-01-25T13:51:18.324-05:00These pictures are amazing, LM! And your song is b...These pictures are amazing, LM! And your song is brilliant. Who wouldn't want to sing along to these lines:<br /><br />He fed you lies like water<br />and he was the air you breathed<br />Didn’t treat you like he oughtta<br />Cut you off below the knees...?<br /><br />You nailed this challenge.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com