tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post7245347693310697686..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: The Forest of DespairLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-91525706110400695512013-05-20T06:58:14.905-04:002013-05-20T06:58:14.905-04:00So sadSo sadnot displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-62807175807906992572013-05-18T16:39:47.531-04:002013-05-18T16:39:47.531-04:00I love the way two or more poets can interpret the...I love the way two or more poets can interpret the same artwork in different ways.<br />A fabulous labyrinth you've drawn with your words, Ms Mouse!<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-31944631197477247722013-05-18T14:24:35.199-04:002013-05-18T14:24:35.199-04:00Total despair must feel like being trapped in a fo...Total despair must feel like being trapped in a forest ... no way out. Great writing, Mouse.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-4465018915649140822013-05-18T11:52:31.693-04:002013-05-18T11:52:31.693-04:00LOVE this interpretation of the painting. Especial...LOVE this interpretation of the painting. Especially "Sorrow hangs like a wet wool blanket"......steeped in atmosphere, a good read.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-13782315408480461612013-05-18T10:52:47.965-04:002013-05-18T10:52:47.965-04:00You really catch the ominous overtones of the pict...You really catch the ominous overtones of the picture, LM--and the feel of being lost in the woods, at first panic and then total, mind-numbing despair. There are many forest to get lost in, and sometimes the ones that aren't physical are the worst.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-28203589617184334172013-05-18T10:12:42.558-04:002013-05-18T10:12:42.558-04:00Mindblowing scary! to think of living in and out o...Mindblowing scary! to think of living in and out of darkness....TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-36385770392226606832013-05-18T09:37:06.283-04:002013-05-18T09:37:06.283-04:00A haunting poem that weaved it's own tale. Nic...A haunting poem that weaved it's own tale. Nicely done.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-12626118487564476432013-05-18T03:58:03.418-04:002013-05-18T03:58:03.418-04:00Sad but beautiful words Lolamouse. Tis true that ...Sad but beautiful words Lolamouse. Tis true that for some, once the forest is entered - it is difficult to leave.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-16606464862963934112013-05-18T00:41:45.525-04:002013-05-18T00:41:45.525-04:00I love what you do here with time not following ru...I love what you do here with time not following rules and sorrow like a wet woolen blanket . . . as if a branch of the forest is speaking, an old mansion, or maybe--a sleeping beauty--one who no longer believes in kisses. I want very much to enter the woods and assist her in looking up ... Wow! Such feeling.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-39566464417334753092013-05-17T23:52:30.525-04:002013-05-17T23:52:30.525-04:00This piece has a very strong contrast between ligh...This piece has a very strong contrast between light an dark. It does have a labyrinth feel to it and getting lost here would be disturbing. Awesome!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24533530214740093572013-05-17T21:08:02.377-04:002013-05-17T21:08:02.377-04:00sorrow hangs like a wet wool blanket...heavy for s...sorrow hangs like a wet wool blanket...heavy for sure...great description that...heres to hoping the warning you give does not scare all away...in them entering, you all may find your way through...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-61596421621320894642013-05-17T17:34:45.367-04:002013-05-17T17:34:45.367-04:00I love the cyclical quality of this piece...your b...I love the cyclical quality of this piece...your beginning cycles round to your ending and I really enjoy how you offer the impenetrable depth of the forest in your poem. Great work, Lola!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-36463174480168430352013-05-17T17:06:20.068-04:002013-05-17T17:06:20.068-04:00Chilling,
I love the line
"Sorrow hangs
like...Chilling,<br />I love the line <br />"Sorrow hangs<br />like a wet wool blanket".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-45885240502933067682013-05-17T15:49:17.184-04:002013-05-17T15:49:17.184-04:00Lola, WOW! I used this same piece of art, but nev...Lola, WOW! I used this same piece of art, but never connected with the darkness and mythological danger possibilities. (Yeah, I'm just THAT upbeat, LOL) <br /><br />From the first line, it reads like that horrible forest on the way to Oz. Still gives me shivers. Love your notice of the different times on the clocks and using it to full effect. Great job. AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-68922533755517595402013-05-17T14:31:05.067-04:002013-05-17T14:31:05.067-04:00I really like the way you worked the image of time...I really like the way you worked the image of time into your poem. This is a dark and twisty interpretation of the artwork - very good indeed.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35464191904478550402013-05-17T14:22:44.857-04:002013-05-17T14:22:44.857-04:00You speak just the thoughts ii had a few days ago....You speak just the thoughts ii had a few days ago. While yours a jungle, mine is a dead city...<br /><br />http://vandanasharmaa.blogspot.in/2013/05/dead-city.htmlVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-17608336898672049622013-05-17T13:42:36.993-04:002013-05-17T13:42:36.993-04:00Oh wow this is ominous and beautiful1 I love the w...Oh wow this is ominous and beautiful1 I love the word labyrinthine! I was so happy to see you btw =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com