tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post6773981773175013574..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Playground GamesLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70025344786799185062012-05-26T11:58:08.315-04:002012-05-26T11:58:08.315-04:00lol....it brings back this game in my primary scho...lol....it brings back this game in my primary school called 'Pile On', where if you were unlucky enough to be on a certain section of grass when the bell rang, you were obliged to be part of a heap of bodies until the janitor came to chase us!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22277524920271039092012-05-25T15:37:32.016-04:002012-05-25T15:37:32.016-04:00This brings back a few memories I'd rather for...This brings back a few memories I'd rather forget...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11317843938981838172012-05-24T12:01:41.645-04:002012-05-24T12:01:41.645-04:00The rhyme in your poem has a spinning cadence that...The rhyme in your poem has a spinning cadence that suggests hidden agendas. Through this well chosen structure, you have developed the theme brilliantly. I think your poem should be included in primary reading materials at every school and discussed thoroughly with all students! Thank you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-203160720134500882012-05-23T20:52:59.231-04:002012-05-23T20:52:59.231-04:00a sinister note to this poem,
there is a quality t...a sinister note to this poem,<br />there is a quality to the eerie<br />circus music threading your writing here. fine job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-45575481723850044042012-05-23T11:49:37.325-04:002012-05-23T11:49:37.325-04:00Children can be so cruel.Children can be so cruel.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-64286391815830076252012-05-22T23:01:44.283-04:002012-05-22T23:01:44.283-04:00Ouch - timely tale...Ouch - timely tale...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78290261694943681052012-05-22T06:33:22.418-04:002012-05-22T06:33:22.418-04:00Oh, the perils of the playground...Oh, the perils of the playground...Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11475235518168540092012-05-22T05:02:08.697-04:002012-05-22T05:02:08.697-04:00Brings back memories. I was a playground 'sof...Brings back memories. I was a playground 'softy' bullied to a degree.<br /><br />Decided to fight back at the ripe old age of twelve - full blown 'girl fight' after school and outside of premises.<br /><br />I well and truly lost - but they never bothered me after that.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86041313895742857212012-05-21T22:13:08.169-04:002012-05-21T22:13:08.169-04:00Love how the singsong nature belies a nasty truth....Love how the singsong nature belies a nasty truth. Great.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-42019962200632979002012-05-21T17:39:05.100-04:002012-05-21T17:39:05.100-04:00With the focus on bullying today .. your Magpie is...With the focus on bullying today .. your Magpie is timed perfectly!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55050900342089781912012-05-21T15:50:41.052-04:002012-05-21T15:50:41.052-04:00these kind of playground games kinda scare me...es...these kind of playground games kinda scare me...esp when being held down and bruising are involved...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com