tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post6659929470436497970..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Over EasyLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-56441223737196727872011-04-23T17:28:24.860-04:002011-04-23T17:28:24.860-04:00Life's like that sometimes! Well written - the...Life's like that sometimes! Well written - the mood caught beautifully.The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46558697416821231702011-04-22T13:13:12.895-04:002011-04-22T13:13:12.895-04:00Very good dialogue story.Very good dialogue story.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10812747833656762382011-04-21T18:54:10.018-04:002011-04-21T18:54:10.018-04:00Excellent, perfect.Excellent, perfect.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33359472224126861882011-04-21T15:40:31.314-04:002011-04-21T15:40:31.314-04:00I thought eggs were yucky, too.I thought eggs were yucky, too.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78336831807517608652011-04-21T13:45:25.565-04:002011-04-21T13:45:25.565-04:00It ended on a lighter note.. I am glad!
For once I...It ended on a lighter note.. I am glad!<br />For once I imagines the child feeling left out with her 2nd mom who is trying pretty hard..<br /><br />This was very realistic and light aired..<br />See, we are just unable to humor it.. we all so want intense drama around- lolss<br /><br />Hugs xoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-29446277503836579212011-04-21T05:16:49.613-04:002011-04-21T05:16:49.613-04:00Good ol' dad - trying to make wrong things rig...Good ol' dad - trying to make wrong things right. Eggs have to be just so!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-67892105742600535672011-04-20T23:41:15.093-04:002011-04-20T23:41:15.093-04:00I immediately went to the thoughts of the absent p...I immediately went to the thoughts of the absent parent... pre-divorce maybe.... Nicely done touching on the emotional pull of these situations, then glancing on the physical ills that can follow.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-29308900703091582752011-04-20T22:01:24.095-04:002011-04-20T22:01:24.095-04:00M.A.S. and nene: Thanks for asking. It's ficti...M.A.S. and nene: Thanks for asking. It's fiction. I've never deserted my daughter, although at age 15 now, I do have fantasies of running away for a while! Unfortunately, I've worked with many kids who've lost parents thru either death or divorce or neglect, etc. so it's familiar territory.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33820289878498243772011-04-20T06:34:25.335-04:002011-04-20T06:34:25.335-04:00Wow, interesting take for a short story of an egg....Wow, interesting take for a short story of an egg.. And not to mention it ended with a light note.. and of course, I am wondering when will mum be returning... *wink*The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09925137911418305053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25217695976678060242011-04-20T01:11:48.949-04:002011-04-20T01:11:48.949-04:00I hope this is complete fiction! Also, my daughter...I hope this is complete fiction! Also, my daughter was very "hungry" and her "tummy hurt" today. But it could only be relieved by very particular foods. As is usually the case.<br /><br />Fun to see you write fiction. Many years ago, I wrote nothing but short stories. I didn't write poetry at all. Now it's all topsy turvy.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-64849285770928541882011-04-19T22:45:50.375-04:002011-04-19T22:45:50.375-04:00Sometimes distractions and Daddy's, take away ...Sometimes distractions and Daddy's, take away a tummy ache, for but a moment.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10517395465699178512011-04-19T20:54:39.841-04:002011-04-19T20:54:39.841-04:00Cooking eggs right is no yolking matter.
*smirk*Cooking eggs right is no yolking matter.<br /><br />*smirk*Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-38650452703111680592011-04-19T16:43:22.967-04:002011-04-19T16:43:22.967-04:00LOL, Nice. :-) This made me smile.LOL, Nice. :-) This made me smile.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-50489112689306393872011-04-19T14:55:17.490-04:002011-04-19T14:55:17.490-04:00Easily bribed, kids, eh? Nice terse realistic dial...Easily bribed, kids, eh? Nice terse realistic dialogue.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-68129809980261214592011-04-19T14:21:45.618-04:002011-04-19T14:21:45.618-04:00No more tummy ache..a miracle..really like this on...No more tummy ache..a miracle..really like this one a lot..so true!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-76447301694718881522011-04-19T11:37:04.073-04:002011-04-19T11:37:04.073-04:00This brought tears to my eyes. So innocent.This brought tears to my eyes. So innocent.Layneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17987198120604731898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-82572709139947072402011-04-19T11:26:28.454-04:002011-04-19T11:26:28.454-04:00Pretty realistic. Where'd this come from?
Glad...Pretty realistic. Where'd this come from?<br />Glad it wasn't a 'bashing' dad commentary.<br /><br />Unless they're french toast made with sour dough bread and chocolate chips in them and mulberry syrup,I will choose not to eat regular pancakes.Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-27078990232247995352011-04-19T10:38:05.513-04:002011-04-19T10:38:05.513-04:00tragic, nicely written, not so easy,eh?tragic, nicely written, not so easy,eh?Isabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-80530085714731225422011-04-19T10:29:26.749-04:002011-04-19T10:29:26.749-04:00Bittersweet tale well told. Wondering here at the...Bittersweet tale well told. Wondering here at the possibilities....how did they get here...any hope for resolution. Child's reaction is priceless...and spot on. Well done. VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35136293582112165552011-04-19T10:21:45.050-04:002011-04-19T10:21:45.050-04:00I think I have heard part of that conversation bef...I think I have heard part of that conversation before. Nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18421928919601722343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-13701990051681891422011-04-19T10:07:26.525-04:002011-04-19T10:07:26.525-04:00Sorry about mom not being there but, that's a ...Sorry about mom not being there but, that's a family who listens! I wanna go with!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com