tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post6442954817414559406..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Windows ReduxLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25937205723944681222011-09-12T10:40:40.180-04:002011-09-12T10:40:40.180-04:00More "proper" indeed. If you abide by t...More "proper" indeed. If you abide by the rules. The other flowed better, in my opinion. I've always been a fan of free verse.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-53279882117885391592011-09-11T13:40:22.323-04:002011-09-11T13:40:22.323-04:00nice pantoum...did my first the other day...really...nice pantoum...did my first the other day...really like the image again of the fireflies in the mason jar...it resonates with me....your closing lines really bring this home...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com