tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post6257686455164854102..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Summer NightLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-32306525101685339592015-09-06T09:38:58.343-04:002015-09-06T09:38:58.343-04:00What Hedge said!What Hedge said!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5275688761352017852015-09-06T05:57:15.911-04:002015-09-06T05:57:15.911-04:00You have described that sense of all becoming one ...You have described that sense of all becoming one so well, and I really feel the lone dog-walker is an outstanding choice of subject for this poem.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-20291160612346732952015-09-06T02:33:39.770-04:002015-09-06T02:33:39.770-04:00I love how you wrote this..Your words brush stroke...I love how you wrote this..Your words brush strokes softening the landscape of thoughtSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11255239653071987042015-09-05T22:26:00.937-04:002015-09-05T22:26:00.937-04:00I love the close ~I love the close ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10110241202450162352015-09-05T11:14:51.690-04:002015-09-05T11:14:51.690-04:00That's one of the most beautiful things I'...That's one of the most beautiful things I've read in awhile. Very touching.Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70031710449054564862015-09-05T04:32:44.966-04:002015-09-05T04:32:44.966-04:00Really enjoyed the blending effect. Thanks for a g...Really enjoyed the blending effect. Thanks for a great readPealogichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06369877267076357849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10081424234948028622015-09-04T13:07:23.431-04:002015-09-04T13:07:23.431-04:00your "blending" theme resonates nicely; ...your "blending" theme resonates nicely; lots of muted tones<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-15453319238437288762015-09-04T11:59:34.462-04:002015-09-04T11:59:34.462-04:00"wrapped in the warm muddy mist of a summer n..."wrapped in the warm muddy mist of a summer night."<br />Your description makes me say "Yes, exactly what I've felt but not been able to express." <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-20087583783172202372015-09-04T11:35:26.094-04:002015-09-04T11:35:26.094-04:00Wow! And "when the doors of perception are c...Wow! And "when the doors of perception are cleansed" ... we may find that the absence of boundaries, the aggregate, is no illusion. I love that you make me see this melting into the summer night.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-50341024191715866182015-09-04T08:22:19.206-04:002015-09-04T08:22:19.206-04:00This is amazingly inventive writing, LM--and I thi...This is amazingly inventive writing, LM--and I think you capture a real feel for how this school of painting gets its effects--how everything becomes a misty one-ness, an aggregate of impressions and shapes and objects, as you stress in your ending.I especially like 'A soup of sound.." and how you work in all the senses--and of course, I couldn't agree with you more about how we and our furry ones somehow merge into a larger whole. Thanks so much for bringing your thoughtful pen to the mix.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-1392445361089241312015-09-04T00:16:08.617-04:002015-09-04T00:16:08.617-04:00Like the way the words and scenes blend into one a...Like the way the words and scenes blend into one another...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-42980731926724945172015-09-03T21:41:09.305-04:002015-09-03T21:41:09.305-04:00Sorry - no way to delete this? when I type, the ty...Sorry - no way to delete this? when I type, the type doesnt show up so I cant see what I'm typing? I love this poem. !Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5562218453616066362015-09-03T21:39:58.254-04:002015-09-03T21:39:58.254-04:00How I love this! Especially "arm becomes leas...How I love this! Especially "arm becomes leash becomes dog" and the clicking nails.........wonderful!ve this! Especially Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-69270669256171260622015-09-03T21:35:45.025-04:002015-09-03T21:35:45.025-04:00You have captured the misty, blending feel of Tona...You have captured the misty, blending feel of Tonalism. It's lovley.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com