tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post6188374025011083407..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Summer NightsLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52659172832967086102012-09-08T18:13:13.467-04:002012-09-08T18:13:13.467-04:00You move like a sax solo
languid in the heat
Oh, ...You move like a sax solo<br />languid in the heat<br /><br />Oh, my! This prompt has really brought out some amazing lines and that is one of my favorites!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-81788855330657331992012-09-07T01:27:22.704-04:002012-09-07T01:27:22.704-04:00Oh, I do love this! Smooth and beautiful.Oh, I do love this! Smooth and beautiful.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-76099769579281748082012-09-05T22:32:50.000-04:002012-09-05T22:32:50.000-04:00Very nice...I like......Very nice...I like......Jo-Anne's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418152399382818709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-66998245684495683372012-09-05T16:56:10.205-04:002012-09-05T16:56:10.205-04:00Jazzy!Jazzy!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51578882552379753892012-09-04T15:07:04.756-04:002012-09-04T15:07:04.756-04:00Now THAT is sultry!Now THAT is sultry!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-57123163586880466572012-09-04T12:09:13.966-04:002012-09-04T12:09:13.966-04:00Mouse, my heartbeat slowed just reading this langu...Mouse, my heartbeat slowed just reading this languid (love that word) piece!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55428264570968790632012-09-04T09:35:00.397-04:002012-09-04T09:35:00.397-04:00Sweat be gone! :)Sweat be gone! :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-36045894417447572832012-09-04T09:13:20.056-04:002012-09-04T09:13:20.056-04:00Mmmmmm..... *stretch*
Very nice.
I could hear it a...Mmmmmm..... *stretch*<br />Very nice.<br />I could hear it and smell it.<br />Very nice indeed!JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-8145176441331882512012-09-04T06:28:07.073-04:002012-09-04T06:28:07.073-04:00This captures a hot, steamy summer night and the l...This captures a hot, steamy summer night and the languor that can arise. Lovely.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52585586317258944402012-09-03T22:38:35.201-04:002012-09-03T22:38:35.201-04:00I love the orchestration of sound, smell, etc--I l...I love the orchestration of sound, smell, etc--I love the entire orchestra and the dancers too, particularly this seductive and true end: "We wait for the ending measures of summer with sweat in our eyes and syncopated heartbeats while the summer nights play on and on." mmmSusanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-87380785167138989362012-09-03T21:27:05.826-04:002012-09-03T21:27:05.826-04:00I like heat dreamy and bluesy like a sleepy cat ~ ...I like heat dreamy and bluesy like a sleepy cat ~ Summer can go on and gon ~<br /><br />Lovely take on the prompt ~ <br /><br />Grace Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33681532951106440582012-09-03T21:22:20.562-04:002012-09-03T21:22:20.562-04:00nice...between moving like a sax sound and a cat.....nice...between moving like a sax sound and a cat....love the moves you make in this...smooth mouse....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75500799374952718022012-09-03T20:23:24.761-04:002012-09-03T20:23:24.761-04:00"We wait
for the ending measures of summer
wi..."We wait<br />for the ending measures of summer<br />with sweat in our eyes<br />and syncopated heartbeats<br />while the summer nights play on<br />and on."<br /><br />Yes, it certainly feels like this, doesn't it. The days still quite hot, but at least some reprieve in the evenings!<br />Enjoyed reading your Magpie, well penned!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.com