tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post5912356415629119869..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: The Forest EdgeLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22163049732972072562012-05-22T12:31:47.753-04:002012-05-22T12:31:47.753-04:00Nostalgia rules supreme...Nostalgia rules supreme...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55688217010217924852012-05-22T10:27:47.753-04:002012-05-22T10:27:47.753-04:00unrequited love is a strong perfume, I myself also...unrequited love is a strong perfume, I myself also heard the music in this, nice oneChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-89028509455163089322012-05-21T20:22:06.183-04:002012-05-21T20:22:06.183-04:00Sad poem to me about missed opportunity. Richly pa...Sad poem to me about missed opportunity. Richly painted. I had to look up dryad (always like to learn a new word!) . Quite a lovely write!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-37872460621287161462012-05-21T19:12:34.249-04:002012-05-21T19:12:34.249-04:00Nice job moving from one mood and meaning to anoth...Nice job moving from one mood and meaning to another without wasted words and images. <br /><br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/05/21/take-action/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-17259394428751432572012-05-21T16:24:25.408-04:002012-05-21T16:24:25.408-04:00This begins and ends with perfume, the scent of it...This begins and ends with perfume, the scent of it from the bottle opened like a Pandora's box, and finally its disappearance. The wistfulness is apparent throughout the poem, like the vapors of that open bottle.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-9980900517586670822012-05-21T15:43:05.557-04:002012-05-21T15:43:05.557-04:00imagery is strong, and the bringing in of olfactor...imagery is strong, and the bringing in of olfactory memory.. who hasn't been taken mental prisoner by an unexpected scent.shawnacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04716421442040188641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21201521135049502262012-05-21T14:59:38.981-04:002012-05-21T14:59:38.981-04:00Memory, tangles, moss. Beautiful images. We all ...Memory, tangles, moss. Beautiful images. We all have places like this stored within us...Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-47982211228422295132012-05-21T14:26:58.550-04:002012-05-21T14:26:58.550-04:00This was beautiful in most unexpected ways. I'...This was beautiful in most unexpected ways. I'm left with a lingering sense of perfume.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71323724870230206942012-05-21T14:17:16.956-04:002012-05-21T14:17:16.956-04:00Oh nice...love the closing lines, so evocative of ...Oh nice...love the closing lines, so evocative of memories that cannot be lived again.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-42207678498609175712012-05-21T12:53:01.303-04:002012-05-21T12:53:01.303-04:00Nice. Wistful.
The path not taken is lost.
**si...Nice. Wistful.<br /><br />The path not taken is lost.<br /><br />**sigh** I have looked for a few of those myself and couldn't find them again.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-28149775558508415952012-05-21T03:53:22.946-04:002012-05-21T03:53:22.946-04:00how many times have i wanted to return to a moment...how many times have i wanted to return to a moment and cannot. {smile}<br /><br />i love how you wove the scents into your poem.<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-66011011131496806712012-05-20T21:36:27.111-04:002012-05-20T21:36:27.111-04:00A beautiful poem! Love the metaphor of love and m...A beautiful poem! Love the metaphor of love and memories evaporating away like perfume. Wonderfully done!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-3785871755088852332012-05-20T18:34:02.975-04:002012-05-20T18:34:02.975-04:00Sensuous and steamy...
With a great ending!Sensuous and steamy...<br />With a great ending!Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51485521393983524082012-05-20T10:51:47.071-04:002012-05-20T10:51:47.071-04:00Nice capture of that mossy forest day ~ I think ...Nice capture of that mossy forest day ~ I think we all have that yearning to revisit those places ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55626714149991498892012-05-20T09:47:40.467-04:002012-05-20T09:47:40.467-04:00I enjoyed this a lot! Sometimes one cannot repeat...I enjoyed this a lot! Sometimes one cannot repeat a journey one has taken even if one travels the same route! We just have to remember the first time, savor memories, and choose another path.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-1270866766946672802012-05-19T23:36:57.283-04:002012-05-19T23:36:57.283-04:00This is really beautiful and sensuous. I like the ...This is really beautiful and sensuous. I like the perfume throughout.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-65172276648445365102012-05-19T22:44:44.310-04:002012-05-19T22:44:44.310-04:00really nice close on the dusty bottle of perfume.....really nice close on the dusty bottle of perfume...the desicated woods at the end play as well off the death of this dream...magical bit here...i like...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com