tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post495358195195733486..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: God In the SynapsesLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35333023426291518452012-06-01T01:39:59.882-04:002012-06-01T01:39:59.882-04:00a stunning description of the all-encompassing sen...a stunning description of the all-encompassing sensations running rampant during a migraine.<br /><br />stunning writing but i'm sorry you've had to experience it!<br /><br />♥<br />dani<br />my heart's love songsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70443319256357825182012-05-28T17:21:13.550-04:002012-05-28T17:21:13.550-04:00You wrote a migraine something beautiful...wonderf...You wrote a migraine something beautiful...wonderfully done!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-77758434168617465362012-05-28T13:40:09.632-04:002012-05-28T13:40:09.632-04:00Back to read it again, kiddo......great writing. I...Back to read it again, kiddo......great writing. I love the title....and the band inside your head......you describe pain from the inside out and I so relate!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-68779492921797554272012-05-28T12:49:33.971-04:002012-05-28T12:49:33.971-04:00Wow...excruciating. Great job portraying the depth...Wow...excruciating. Great job portraying the depth of this pain. <br /><br />I really like the idea of this:<br /><br />"Searching for God in the synapses<br />between neurons"<br /><br />Nice write!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71881176076869158552012-05-28T12:20:45.544-04:002012-05-28T12:20:45.544-04:00GAH! I can feel every bit of it, LM--this is just ...GAH! I can feel every bit of it, LM--this is just exquisite description, and lots of excellent irony makes it even more effective. I hope your head cuts you some slack--you can't ignore or minimize that kind of pain, it's too close.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86671634860184552622012-05-28T11:00:05.226-04:002012-05-28T11:00:05.226-04:00Ow. That made me wince.
Very good.
And very bad...Ow. That made me wince.<br /><br />Very good.<br /><br />And very bad at the same time.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-6394947469551371732012-05-28T10:37:00.257-04:002012-05-28T10:37:00.257-04:00I love your title and the way you developed this u...I love your title and the way you developed this unique interpretation of the art and photography.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86031033198809279262012-05-28T00:15:46.828-04:002012-05-28T00:15:46.828-04:00Oh I so feel your pain. Literally. I have had chro...Oh I so feel your pain. Literally. I have had chronic head pain since 1996. Not as bad as a migraine, thankfully, or at least not very often. Love the garage band in your temples line. I used to joke that with my head banging, my neck clicking and my knee cracking, I was my own marching band. Love "the gods wont be bribed". Hang in there! And if you can write a poem this good with a migraine, you are truly amazing!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-73757677016776704242012-05-27T20:59:11.153-04:002012-05-27T20:59:11.153-04:00I have had migraines..you have described them so w...I have had migraines..you have described them so well...one of my worst sent me to the emergency room and before it was over I thought I would go mad from the pain.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-87271086805843286172012-05-27T20:45:43.146-04:002012-05-27T20:45:43.146-04:00ugh...my head hurts just thinking about this as i ...ugh...my head hurts just thinking about this as i read...off to look for my ice pick..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78768547253589387492012-05-27T20:21:28.994-04:002012-05-27T20:21:28.994-04:00I love what you did with the picture, painful twis...I love what you did with the picture, painful twists and amplifiers inside the skull, appealing for unconsciousness ~ Happy Sunday ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11801407024084343352012-05-27T20:18:55.066-04:002012-05-27T20:18:55.066-04:00I feel your pain.......
Ok I don't really fee...I feel your pain.......<br /><br />Ok I don't really feel your pain but I know you would gladly give it to me so you do not have to endure it again and if I could take it from you and give you a break I would do so..........Jo-Anne's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418152399382818709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-69065144014020166482012-05-27T18:49:41.244-04:002012-05-27T18:49:41.244-04:00I really like these sections:
"before...
Sce...I really like these sections:<br /><br />"before...<br />Scents of patchouli and blueberry drift"<br /><br />"The eye twists in its socket<br />while a vise tightens around the temples"<br /><br />rosemarymint.wordpress.com✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-53632658626821986182012-05-27T18:45:32.881-04:002012-05-27T18:45:32.881-04:00I have never had a migraine, for which I am sincer...I have never had a migraine, for which I am sincerely grateful.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com