tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post4290322713440211872..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Seize the DayLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-17935965702044216362011-12-16T17:36:09.227-05:002011-12-16T17:36:09.227-05:00Excellent write!
Anna :o}Excellent write!<br /><br />Anna :o}hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-26079473224783082082011-12-15T21:07:48.775-05:002011-12-15T21:07:48.775-05:00A sort of hopeless resignation in this, but still ...A sort of hopeless resignation in this, but still tinged with the desire for things to be different...I liked that combination.susan m hinckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073318305866251569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-37491470977338836922011-12-14T12:30:21.874-05:002011-12-14T12:30:21.874-05:00Waiting for all to line up perfectly--doesn't ...Waiting for all to line up perfectly--doesn't always work out does it.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25234157017555301622011-12-14T09:09:33.232-05:002011-12-14T09:09:33.232-05:00And you don't tell us how you got to be like t...And you don't tell us how you got to be like that or what happened next. Quite right. Brilliant!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-53730661971062485312011-12-14T03:37:22.728-05:002011-12-14T03:37:22.728-05:00Nicely written! I think we both had a similar idea...Nicely written! I think we both had a similar ideas...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-77865323308849115482011-12-13T17:47:49.340-05:002011-12-13T17:47:49.340-05:00I know this. :) Excellent.I know this. :) Excellent.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33268536555556186862011-12-13T05:57:06.973-05:002011-12-13T05:57:06.973-05:00Sometimes we can dream fantastic adventures, but t...Sometimes we can dream fantastic adventures, but there's nothing quite like taking the plunge, for real.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-62784780556710135282011-12-12T16:59:16.880-05:002011-12-12T16:59:16.880-05:00Excellent -- rhyme, meter, the works...Excellent -- rhyme, meter, the works...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70176311261327147362011-12-12T14:38:11.632-05:002011-12-12T14:38:11.632-05:00Waiting for that perfect moment that never comes.....Waiting for that perfect moment that never comes...guilty as charged!WyomingDivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14347884469260061872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-48903231936141124252011-12-12T13:25:47.732-05:002011-12-12T13:25:47.732-05:00and I was buried in the sand
for I could not leave...and I was buried in the sand<br />for I could not leave home<br /><br />Not everybody is stricken by wanderlust! ♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19216150623633292202011-12-12T11:35:59.201-05:002011-12-12T11:35:59.201-05:00Wow. This was great!Wow. This was great!BBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09432729957196570774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10147063973774500762011-12-12T11:16:25.149-05:002011-12-12T11:16:25.149-05:00Boy I hate that. A perfect chance gone. Pfui.Boy I hate that. A perfect chance gone. Pfui.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-72381812420932822642011-12-12T10:57:59.115-05:002011-12-12T10:57:59.115-05:00I loved this until the last line, then I just star...I loved this until the last line, then I just stared at the page, somewhat bemused. It rolls of the tongue as I read it, great rhythm and timing, then just seemed to fall flat.<br /><br />My boat she waited in the sea,<br />For that auspicious day,<br />As I was buried in the sand<br />And could not get away.<br /><br />Would that work? It also mirrors the title as well I think.<br /><br />Just a suggestion. Otherwise, I really do like this and would hate this to be taken the wrong way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51799876677345459522011-12-12T09:52:12.975-05:002011-12-12T09:52:12.975-05:00Wanting something, and going for it, very hard dec...Wanting something, and going for it, very hard decisions at times. Perfect take on the picture.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-85085152020378396502011-12-12T08:46:45.683-05:002011-12-12T08:46:45.683-05:00I like the life lesson! not fun; but true analogy...I like the life lesson! not fun; but true analogy<br />thanks!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51922399517828773242011-12-12T08:24:05.536-05:002011-12-12T08:24:05.536-05:00felt...we have to make some tough choices at times...felt...we have to make some tough choices at times...to kill the dream or pursue it based on our connections...i hope in those moments we make the right decisionsBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55774756144285913612011-12-12T07:41:29.616-05:002011-12-12T07:41:29.616-05:00I like the unexpected twist in the final lines.. Y...I like the unexpected twist in the final lines.. You told your tale most effectively in this form.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com