tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3893512892071156999..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: A Couple of CoupletsLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-27190316154489862602012-04-21T12:37:55.113-04:002012-04-21T12:37:55.113-04:00Cherry blossoms are a wonderful part of spring, so...Cherry blossoms are a wonderful part of spring, so beautiful whether overhead or underfoot. And you did well with the framed couplets here, as well!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46307784753450495562012-04-21T12:37:52.646-04:002012-04-21T12:37:52.646-04:00Cherry blossoms are a wonderful part of spring, so...Cherry blossoms are a wonderful part of spring, so beautiful whether overhead or underfoot. And you did well with the framed couplets here, as well!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5178643233537899492012-04-20T11:28:33.056-04:002012-04-20T11:28:33.056-04:00I thought this one would be right up your alley, L...I thought this one would be right up your alley, LM. Nice job. I love those pink rains of April, even though the petals look pretty damn good where they were--it's about the cycle.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-2152606042717587392012-04-20T11:09:28.961-04:002012-04-20T11:09:28.961-04:00Nice and simple. I like that. Last week when I m...Nice and simple. I like that. Last week when I mowed there was lavender and lilacs and violets and wild onions all growing at the same time. My yard smelled really funny. Like someone's Italian grandmother.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-41618753141662434322012-04-20T11:01:12.465-04:002012-04-20T11:01:12.465-04:00LOVELY and PERFECT. You completely understand the ...LOVELY and PERFECT. You completely understand the concept and you wrote it so beautifully. Thank you. I felt I was there in every word!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71412361547564885742012-04-20T06:37:42.265-04:002012-04-20T06:37:42.265-04:00Sweet frame.
The ending reminds me of a poem I wr...Sweet frame.<br /><br />The ending reminds me of a poem I wrote called Carpet of Fire<br />about red leaves under the trees.<br />I knew exactly what you meant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-47478423492288642972012-04-20T06:19:55.281-04:002012-04-20T06:19:55.281-04:00Lovely. Can't wait until the spring blossom h...Lovely. Can't wait until the spring blossom happens here. have to get through winter first though :(not displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52800661439670792032012-04-20T01:30:42.778-04:002012-04-20T01:30:42.778-04:00Nice framed couplets!
Madeleine Begun KaneNice framed couplets! <br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-65619772708200401532012-04-20T00:10:12.043-04:002012-04-20T00:10:12.043-04:00Lovely decryption of spring, love the smell of fl...Lovely decryption of spring, love the smell of flowers during spring time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19764590434356679752012-04-19T23:52:20.634-04:002012-04-19T23:52:20.634-04:00Rhyming back-to-front, upside-down and inside-out....Rhyming back-to-front, upside-down and inside-out.<br />Well done and I particularly like the April/lay p..., where you borrow a letter from the next word to make the front rhyme perfect.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-248896592001252892012-04-19T23:51:46.614-04:002012-04-19T23:51:46.614-04:00Very nice and enjoyed your tags :).Very nice and enjoyed your tags :).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-38099165418130774942012-04-19T23:26:00.719-04:002012-04-19T23:26:00.719-04:00i love the cherry blossoms...one of my fav parts o...i love the cherry blossoms...one of my fav parts of spring...<br /><br />still working on mine...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com