tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3747884610220466676..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: No PhoenixLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52262839048246179812013-01-05T19:28:24.945-05:002013-01-05T19:28:24.945-05:00I especially like "your face still wears yest...I especially like "your face still wears yesterday's sins"...powerful line, Mouse...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-32994913893215567122013-01-05T06:16:20.035-05:002013-01-05T06:16:20.035-05:00Strong words paint a sad picture.♥Strong words paint a sad picture.♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84360992620818096012013-01-04T13:42:39.780-05:002013-01-04T13:42:39.780-05:00Very powerful poem! Wine and cigarettes seem comf...Very powerful poem! Wine and cigarettes seem comforting at the time, but breaking free of that habit would be such a great change...Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-89498284689747833082013-01-03T12:36:16.604-05:002013-01-03T12:36:16.604-05:00I really like this!I really like this!Frances Garroodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10614916006798375706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-27730504239268549982013-01-02T20:27:46.396-05:002013-01-02T20:27:46.396-05:00I can see the bright red lipstick against the mono...I can see the bright red lipstick against the monotone New Year's Eve - great poem -thanks for sharingMaurice Lauherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17172919097442000887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19815198718132639632013-01-02T16:58:56.288-05:002013-01-02T16:58:56.288-05:00Love the Phoenix from the ashes part at the end. ...Love the Phoenix from the ashes part at the end. This is like a companion to the MagPie I wrote. Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-57322450932775957662013-01-02T14:07:30.838-05:002013-01-02T14:07:30.838-05:00You have outdone yourself. This is one of my very ...You have outdone yourself. This is one of my very favorites. I tried to find something particular that stands out, but I love the whole thing.<br /><br />M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-49035983450411532412013-01-02T01:31:29.467-05:002013-01-02T01:31:29.467-05:00As the core of your poem, these lines do a fantast...As the core of your poem, these lines do a fantastic job of focusing your theme with all senses firing:<br /><br />No one for you to kiss<br />when the clock strikes,<br />so you leave your lipstick<br />on the cigarette butts<br />and kiss another bottle of wine goodnight.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-20816629802297266282013-01-01T23:14:15.987-05:002013-01-01T23:14:15.987-05:00Well done.....
yes, that kiss says it all~
You exp...Well done.....<br />yes, that kiss says it all~<br />You expressed this so well~<br /><br />Happy New Year Miss Mouse ;DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-18161377762149718612013-01-01T20:23:20.477-05:002013-01-01T20:23:20.477-05:00nicely done indeed..thanks for sharing....and have...nicely done indeed..thanks for sharing....and have a great NYWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-26028716222365869702013-01-01T20:02:12.984-05:002013-01-01T20:02:12.984-05:00You know ... this fits perfectly with my New Year ...You know ... this fits perfectly with my New Year celebration ... alone. By my choice though, so all was fine! <br />Happy New Year Mouse!!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-38527488254981143752013-01-01T19:19:55.602-05:002013-01-01T19:19:55.602-05:00the sad repetition of life for some...telling them...the sad repetition of life for some...telling themselves it will be different but unwilling to let life change...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46245891535029087672013-01-01T18:46:16.247-05:002013-01-01T18:46:16.247-05:00"kiss another bottle of wine goodnight"...."kiss another bottle of wine goodnight"...that's gross and sad and really well expressed, all at the same time.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.com