tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3600468135758325633..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: KiteLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-200100681756716112015-03-03T08:56:29.544-05:002015-03-03T08:56:29.544-05:00Exceptional poetry - you have brought the characte...Exceptional poetry - you have brought the character of the kite alive despite the constraints of word number.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-77291085114093545302015-03-03T07:52:59.509-05:002015-03-03T07:52:59.509-05:00Your navel ring really got me and the ghostlike im...Your navel ring really got me and the ghostlike image haunts~ <br /> So, visually well done~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-31551679305901337122015-03-03T03:58:12.495-05:002015-03-03T03:58:12.495-05:00When the lightness becomes so filled with pain.. s...When the lightness becomes so filled with pain.. somehow coming from Mary's poem to yours when pain is either light or heavy makes a very interesting contrast. Well done.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-82205231692859140082015-03-03T03:37:21.403-05:002015-03-03T03:37:21.403-05:00this in lieu of the soul the hovers o'er. ah, ...this in lieu of the soul the hovers o'er. ah, to be a kite and be tethered to a string held by someone that loves you and only wants for you to enjoy the wind and flight. well penned my friend<br /><br />graciasMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.com