tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3346979081288864145..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: She's Just a GirlLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-8081250302081260612011-05-17T05:42:39.064-04:002011-05-17T05:42:39.064-04:00Every young woman has felt this entirely! So well ...Every young woman has felt this entirely! So well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-31457980954131644492011-05-11T08:50:13.963-04:002011-05-11T08:50:13.963-04:00One of those classic subjects, but an interesting ...One of those classic subjects, but an interesting twist on it. Nice job!Paul Mullinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08342387711052394010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-47385241033026647432011-05-10T15:08:52.265-04:002011-05-10T15:08:52.265-04:00Looking for love in all the wrong places perhaps? ...Looking for love in all the wrong places perhaps? This is a sad tale of love or the lack of.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-30619043284648106812011-05-09T15:39:17.421-04:002011-05-09T15:39:17.421-04:00Even in a relationship, I can identify with this o...Even in a relationship, I can identify with this one, esp. the line "She just can't help herself<br />They're what she craves." Well written.WyomingDivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14347884469260061872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-73493482697744207402011-05-08T18:25:30.278-04:002011-05-08T18:25:30.278-04:00I love this poem! I just spent 9 days surrounded ...I love this poem! I just spent 9 days surrounded by beautiful gay men and I so no what you are feeling. Good luck to you, I am sure you are beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-85892997921486152792011-05-07T14:27:23.011-04:002011-05-07T14:27:23.011-04:00I found your poem quirky and pleasant. Reminded me...I found your poem quirky and pleasant. Reminded me of a song. Maybe you write lyrics? I think that we've all started crying after hearing a certain song. Good observation.k2kinghttp://ksquaredpoetry.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-20270210683386932832011-05-07T01:01:59.717-04:002011-05-07T01:01:59.717-04:00It is amazing - how some of the "most worthy&...It is amazing - how some of the "most worthy" are left unattached ... is it maturity? is it misunderstanding? it she/he intimidating? ... ?? ... ?? ... ??<br /><br />Nicely done!!! I believe many of us can relate to some part of this from times in our younger lives!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78659055723855755752011-05-06T10:44:22.926-04:002011-05-06T10:44:22.926-04:00if only each and everyone of us can find that ligh...if only each and everyone of us can find that light within, then no one would need to look for happiness somewhere else. your poem is beautiful and thought-provoking as well... as always. :)Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52330449024605011982011-05-05T11:27:31.623-04:002011-05-05T11:27:31.623-04:00Hey! Hey! This is my favourite PPR so far. Excelle...Hey! Hey! This is my favourite PPR so far. Excellent insight into love. It happens. Nice to see it being literally catered for.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-91197947279215068922011-05-05T09:44:11.835-04:002011-05-05T09:44:11.835-04:00It happens... Poor girl! And a really good materia...It happens... Poor girl! And a really good material to read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25812172670405317012011-05-05T07:39:06.071-04:002011-05-05T07:39:06.071-04:00The poem tells about how a little girl yearns to b...The poem tells about how a little girl yearns to be looked up by the opposite genders...well-written.<br /><br />I feel that every humans on earth wanted to be appreciated for some beauty of theirs either physically or mentally and we are...yet the time and distance changes.<br /><br />And for all parents ,their prince and princess is their son or daughter :):):) forever !Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-73300762450353176352011-05-05T03:13:06.807-04:002011-05-05T03:13:06.807-04:00very beautifully written. it touches the heart and...very beautifully written. it touches the heart and one feels sad for the girl.<br /><br />trisha<br />http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2011/05/04/drama-for-may-challenge/trishahttp://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2011/05/04/drama-for-may-challenge/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-43498678673555964362011-05-05T00:49:43.427-04:002011-05-05T00:49:43.427-04:00Wouldn't know anything about it ... NOT. Grea...Wouldn't know anything about it ... NOT. Great job.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/two-for-one-poets-rally-43.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-72413477754437834422011-05-05T00:15:47.204-04:002011-05-05T00:15:47.204-04:00hmm yes - guess we're all looking for love and...hmm yes - guess we're all looking for love and hope to find it in the most crazy places sometimes...one day mr. right will turn up...i like the restless pace in your poem...matches with the restlesness you describeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22327342516966886162011-05-04T20:17:16.682-04:002011-05-04T20:17:16.682-04:00The allure of the unattainable? This was a really...The allure of the unattainable? This was a really lyrical piece..Enjoyed. VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75323742258197548762011-05-04T18:25:00.070-04:002011-05-04T18:25:00.070-04:00Poor sweetie. Fag hags need love, too. I hope she ...Poor sweetie. Fag hags need love, too. I hope she finds it!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5787556960408861532011-05-04T17:56:50.023-04:002011-05-04T17:56:50.023-04:00Agree with Charlie .. I can so relate to this .. b...Agree with Charlie .. I can so relate to this .. but then I learned to put myself to better use .. like blogging :)<br /><br />Good one !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-39898588141301941702011-05-04T17:25:06.822-04:002011-05-04T17:25:06.822-04:00With a melody you have a fine, fine song here.
Ye...With a melody you have a fine, fine song here.<br /><br />Yes, I think every one of us can relate to feeling like this at one time or another.<br /><br />I liked the honesty in this a lot!<br /><br />xoJannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-79840112589409815042011-05-04T16:14:13.315-04:002011-05-04T16:14:13.315-04:00Unrequited love from those who will most likely ne...Unrequited love from those who will most likely never be interested... ouch. No wonder the mascara runs at the end of the night. A very sad, honest, well written poem.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84252176471469809312011-05-04T16:11:31.517-04:002011-05-04T16:11:31.517-04:00just looking for someone to love her...you are pro...just looking for someone to love her...you are probably not surprised to know how common this is, esp in the kids that counsel...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-90185896219183222422011-05-04T15:57:51.732-04:002011-05-04T15:57:51.732-04:00I now have that old Blur song "Boys & Gir...I now have that old Blur song "Boys & Girls" stuck in my head!<br /><br />Great piece this one!Crayotic Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13480766951670643937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-72371881147453395952011-05-04T15:45:14.112-04:002011-05-04T15:45:14.112-04:00So her real problem is her poor taste in men - or,...So her real problem is her poor taste in men - or, rather, boys.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-4572881018648235682011-05-04T13:23:50.603-04:002011-05-04T13:23:50.603-04:00I think whoever you are there are times in your li...I think whoever you are there are times in your life you can relate to this one...nicely wordedCharlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11474860199601731662011-05-04T13:17:20.235-04:002011-05-04T13:17:20.235-04:00always enjoy your creative work and if i was a guy...always enjoy your creative work and if i was a guy (which i am) living close to the golden gate bridge (which i did) i would wait there to heroically stop you from driving off the bridge.<br /><br />if after all that you still wanted to take the plunge i would say...why not, but let's leave the car for triple-a...holding hands for that "one more wave" would be more thelma and louise, bonnie and clydish...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com