tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3078717224952001299..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Mouse HeartLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10691660366409257112013-08-26T01:00:50.528-04:002013-08-26T01:00:50.528-04:00Nicely done, Lolamouse!Nicely done, Lolamouse!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10343815251571447432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-7595556516393491902013-08-24T20:41:08.050-04:002013-08-24T20:41:08.050-04:00great line..."a small, dead mouse I wear arou...great line..."a small, dead mouse I wear around my neck"...<br />I really understand the hiding of the heart...your really wrote some powerful words...George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86115063571614514292013-08-22T22:41:53.128-04:002013-08-22T22:41:53.128-04:00Powerful poem. I understand hiding your heart, gla...Powerful poem. I understand hiding your heart, glad you put it back in your chest. The dead mouse around your neck as a tribute to your "dead" love, whew! Excellent!Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-28249965016094399572013-08-22T20:14:44.302-04:002013-08-22T20:14:44.302-04:00dang. the heart around the neck as a small dead mo...dang. the heart around the neck as a small dead mouse you keep as a tribute....def dark, but well spun too mouse...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5153391994243958112013-08-22T19:03:45.103-04:002013-08-22T19:03:45.103-04:00Wow, this is a powerful poem. I like the idea of ...Wow, this is a powerful poem. I like the idea of getting along without your heart and realizing that there's always a risk.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-44172426395489661422013-08-22T17:54:19.409-04:002013-08-22T17:54:19.409-04:00Phooey. You have tons of heart.Phooey. You have tons of heart.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84604152627858380462013-08-22T16:26:54.485-04:002013-08-22T16:26:54.485-04:00Wonderfully dark, wonderfully wonderful!
Anna :o]Wonderfully dark, wonderfully wonderful!<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-55559763821476571982013-08-22T11:46:06.267-04:002013-08-22T11:46:06.267-04:00Very good, mi amigaVery good, mi amigaMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-69368411554210554312013-08-22T11:18:02.483-04:002013-08-22T11:18:02.483-04:00A touch of Poe in it. Powerfully dark...love it!!A touch of Poe in it. Powerfully dark...love it!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-12231435471318170482013-08-22T10:57:38.953-04:002013-08-22T10:57:38.953-04:00I love love those last lines dark, obsessive, awes...I love love those last lines dark, obsessive, awesome! This is fantastic putting your heart under the floorboards immediately conjures Edgar Allen Poe Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com