tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post3003107427342758198..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Little GhostLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-88596571318170391372011-11-20T02:16:31.531-05:002011-11-20T02:16:31.531-05:00I like the sadness and simplicity of this poem.
=...I like the sadness and simplicity of this poem.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-73622103355684097342011-11-19T21:00:46.382-05:002011-11-19T21:00:46.382-05:00I really like the idea and the line "She was ...I really like the idea and the line "She was just a little ghost."M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-77417760008390905802011-11-19T16:24:42.470-05:002011-11-19T16:24:42.470-05:00Nice Magpie Lolamouse! Great photo and I love wha...Nice Magpie Lolamouse! Great photo and I love what you did with it.Jotter Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01569764512503044393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-67729377785248547542011-11-17T11:44:39.861-05:002011-11-17T11:44:39.861-05:00Well! A sad Magpie for sure ... quite wonderful t...Well! A sad Magpie for sure ... quite wonderful to read.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-43796902407054059392011-11-17T08:27:12.050-05:002011-11-17T08:27:12.050-05:00That last line sums it all up. Is the world full o...That last line sums it all up. Is the world full of empty chairs and empty people?<br />A delightful read that conjured up many differing images.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-9147803499368770122011-11-17T07:40:38.503-05:002011-11-17T07:40:38.503-05:00Fresh take on the prompt, and beautifully expresse...Fresh take on the prompt, and beautifully expressed...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-35802988784250857282011-11-16T14:20:25.866-05:002011-11-16T14:20:25.866-05:00wow what a sad tale of woe...to be gone and unmiss...wow what a sad tale of woe...to be gone and unmissed...really nice gritty textures you bring out in her...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-3987606729671709542011-11-16T14:08:12.064-05:002011-11-16T14:08:12.064-05:00Oh what a realistic and sorrowful tale. Great inte...Oh what a realistic and sorrowful tale. Great interpretation of the prompt. I can see the facial expressions of the people, you wrote this so well!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-64097252802137260412011-11-16T13:16:00.792-05:002011-11-16T13:16:00.792-05:00Very good and so darn sad. The fringe kids used to...Very good and so darn sad. The fringe kids used to come and go never quite fitting in. Oh boy, don't I know this story on a personal level.Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-59880507335561972342011-11-16T12:14:02.197-05:002011-11-16T12:14:02.197-05:00Oooohh snap. Girl child, sometimes your way with ...Oooohh snap. Girl child, sometimes your way with words makes my teeth ache.JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-44107029738373634702011-11-16T10:42:58.335-05:002011-11-16T10:42:58.335-05:00Tragic but oh so very significant! We as a human r...Tragic but oh so very significant! We as a human race don't understand the psychological impact of 'intimate intrusion' at whatever age and stage in our lives and by whomever. <br /><br />I think about this issue constantly and extensively. I enjoyed your quiet, subtle yet very poignant approach. Wonderfully written. Gracias!nenehttp://nene-lifewhispers.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-16552538883655148472011-11-16T10:24:38.550-05:002011-11-16T10:24:38.550-05:00I feel bad for her. "the kind of girl everyon...I feel bad for her. "the kind of girl everyone talked about and no one talked to" ...that says a lot, none of it good, and all of it about others, not her. I hope she left that place and went far away. I hope the rest of her story is happier.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-14453327993365942682011-11-16T09:36:09.183-05:002011-11-16T09:36:09.183-05:00Ahh. Wrote a similarly themed post a couple days ...Ahh. Wrote a similarly themed post a couple days ago about a girl in my 7th grade class, and this so reminds me of her.<br /><br />Nicely done.<br /><br />PearlPearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05261369905176088917noreply@blogger.com