tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post2469355478169710597..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Buried DeepLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19230854087493446092011-12-06T03:31:57.567-05:002011-12-06T03:31:57.567-05:00this is stunning! ♥this is stunning! ♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-80775078912199438962011-12-06T02:58:49.301-05:002011-12-06T02:58:49.301-05:00This poem feels sad and true. I was especially ca...This poem feels sad and true. I was especially caught by "does not the heart have seasons too nad the idea of membrane between one and what one wants. I've felt that. You also really catch the colors of fall and their absence in winter. Here in Texas we still have color, but not much longer. I will be looking for more of your work by following here.Victorianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46996608110287741222011-12-05T06:44:51.763-05:002011-12-05T06:44:51.763-05:00Beautifully colourful concept of thoughts too deep...Beautifully colourful concept of thoughts too deep to express...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-87957771847772845022011-12-05T00:12:12.102-05:002011-12-05T00:12:12.102-05:00Well, little mouse lola, this was written by a mig...Well, little mouse lola, this was written by a mighty mouse. A very strong hand here, in images, meter, message. <br />Wow.<br /><a href="http://chrisalba-enchantedoak.blogspot.com/2011/12/oh-boy-deep-freeze.html" rel="nofollow">The Deep Freeze</a>Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-71229681575533842782011-12-04T14:02:26.722-05:002011-12-04T14:02:26.722-05:00Membrane between me and what I want -> sad conc...Membrane between me and what I want -> sad conceptAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-47233351196070009312011-12-02T22:12:40.193-05:002011-12-02T22:12:40.193-05:00I like the winter images and meaning in the relati...I like the winter images and meaning in the relationship. Very creative and vivid words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-8511895000042701142011-12-01T13:54:06.260-05:002011-12-01T13:54:06.260-05:00everything has ups and downs,
well fine tuned sen...everything has ups and downs,<br /><br />well fine tuned sentiments.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70662456821588552682011-12-01T13:35:59.265-05:002011-12-01T13:35:59.265-05:00Liked this very much Your words and imagery speak ...Liked this very much Your words and imagery speak of winters drabness well and yet this is my favorite time of year.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-28291223630631563022011-12-01T12:43:53.107-05:002011-12-01T12:43:53.107-05:00nene: Thank you for your concern and your lovely p...nene: Thank you for your concern and your lovely poem! I am doing fine. Always get a tad melancholy when the days get shorter and colder but I'm out of the deep blue funk of earlier. Thanks for thinking of me!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-14833569514828088882011-12-01T11:30:41.854-05:002011-12-01T11:30:41.854-05:00Winter can put it's cold pall over everything,...Winter can put it's cold pall over everything, at times. That was perfect. And a bit "chilling".JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-65051933170966830452011-12-01T10:26:49.840-05:002011-12-01T10:26:49.840-05:00Oh, by the way, lovely and wonderful portrayal of ...Oh, by the way, lovely and wonderful portrayal of this time of the year.nenehttp://nene-lifewhispers.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-83765036218392124272011-12-01T10:25:29.588-05:002011-12-01T10:25:29.588-05:00Hope you're ok, lolamouse. To this I say:
Do ...Hope you're ok, lolamouse. To this I say:<br /><br />Do not disdain portrayals of Love<br />nor feign affection <br />but receive with open arms and heart<br />life's every emanation<br />for Loves they falter and tend to fade away<br />and hearts they get scorned<br />and cry from day to day<br />do not fold within <br />like flower sleeping<br />at the end of it's season<br />but always leave a little room<br />to start againnenehttp://nene-lifewhispers.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-90343174592869393782011-11-30T20:31:11.089-05:002011-11-30T20:31:11.089-05:00Winter is approaching, true enough! And we remembe...Winter is approaching, true enough! And we remember how it had been with people warm and cold just as the seasons. Great verse!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-28269802477729358362011-11-30T19:01:21.519-05:002011-11-30T19:01:21.519-05:00File this under "N" for "nuanced&qu...File this under "N" for "nuanced"!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-79409978387858644142011-11-30T18:58:32.020-05:002011-11-30T18:58:32.020-05:00I look forward to the winter you described ... sno...I look forward to the winter you described ... snow and all.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-18118626564604010942011-11-30T18:39:50.024-05:002011-11-30T18:39:50.024-05:00Besides the deep sadness that lurks in this poem t...Besides the deep sadness that lurks in this poem the words and images are lovely. I especially like the description of winter in the first stanza. You undoubted have experienced snowy winters. Bravo.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-85824863528526354332011-11-30T16:54:08.789-05:002011-11-30T16:54:08.789-05:00I love the "deepness" in this poem. I do...I love the "deepness" in this poem. I do think things can be buried deep both in winter and in summer; and I also think that hearts DO have seasons of their own. Sometimes they correspond with the exterior weather, sometimes not. Thanks for participating in Poetry Jam!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25606382330145548882011-11-30T14:20:26.350-05:002011-11-30T14:20:26.350-05:00I like the contrast and descriptiveness of the fir...I like the contrast and descriptiveness of the first two stanzas...and the mystery in the final stanza, especially the very last line.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-82497680022688817102011-11-30T14:16:43.542-05:002011-11-30T14:16:43.542-05:00relationships do have seasons...and some of them a...relationships do have seasons...and some of them are hard to live through...i guess there is that hope that seasons change and new life can once more burst forth...that birth process though is not without pain...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22310203595477250012011-11-30T14:09:57.384-05:002011-11-30T14:09:57.384-05:00cold and deep indeed.
well done.cold and deep indeed.<br /><br />well done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.com