tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post1973529205363150218..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: The Girl Who Loves WinterLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22034486394464356012012-02-08T22:25:22.806-05:002012-02-08T22:25:22.806-05:00...intriguing! I didn't see that end coming b......intriguing! I didn't see that end coming but it is perfect! Wow, lolamouse!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21734157109556456792012-02-07T23:16:00.503-05:002012-02-07T23:16:00.503-05:00heartfelt story, sad and beautiful. smiles.
Hell...heartfelt story, sad and beautiful. smiles.<br /><br /><br />Hello,<br />How are you?<br />Do you like challenges?<br />Share your talent with us by writing for our theme today, or share a random piece of poetry.<br /><br />Hope to see you soon!<br />Best wishes.<br />Cheers.<br />Happy Creative Writing,<br />xoxoxJingle Poetry At Olive Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591535202657302861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-74569561266228903602012-02-07T13:29:48.938-05:002012-02-07T13:29:48.938-05:00Thank you lovely people for all the kind words!Thank you lovely people for all the kind words!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-40214844650548827742012-02-07T13:08:18.412-05:002012-02-07T13:08:18.412-05:00What a marvellous poem-story. Love the chamomile p...What a marvellous poem-story. Love the chamomile popsicle.......cool write! No pun intended. Hee hee.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-54674684844299017912012-02-07T10:25:42.285-05:002012-02-07T10:25:42.285-05:00Ahhhh....this SO appeals to my Bedlamite nature......Ahhhh....this SO appeals to my Bedlamite nature...........<br /><br />I love this girl.<br /><br />:)Mimi Foxmortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13572725659728049534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-72887043256408748962012-02-07T08:49:23.940-05:002012-02-07T08:49:23.940-05:00Just so cool! You have created a whole snow-globe ...Just so cool! You have created a whole snow-globe world here and placed an intriguing character inside it. So many things I like about the piece, particularly the frozen popsicle tea, the hoar frost hair ornaments and the lover's breath kept in a jar on the night stand.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-8689041498675510582012-02-07T08:46:05.033-05:002012-02-07T08:46:05.033-05:00Very nice. I like it!Very nice. I like it!twinkly sparkleshttp://www.twinklysparkles.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-54394606911184714932012-02-07T08:36:47.495-05:002012-02-07T08:36:47.495-05:00I came back to see this again. "Dreams Of Hea...I came back to see this again. "Dreams Of Heaven And Earth" is just in a class all by itself, and then this one and "Marked" also blew my doors off. For a mouse, you write awfully good poetry!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-83370666902219962042012-02-07T04:20:25.527-05:002012-02-07T04:20:25.527-05:00Very beautiful. Love this muchlyVery beautiful. Love this muchlynot displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-41427538269407258442012-02-06T23:06:28.373-05:002012-02-06T23:06:28.373-05:00Enjoyed your wintry poem .. don't enjoy the ha...Enjoyed your wintry poem .. don't enjoy the harshness of winter.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-796718636061619952012-02-06T19:11:58.440-05:002012-02-06T19:11:58.440-05:00nice...love the jar of his breath on the bedside t...nice...love the jar of his breath on the bedside table...very cool...also the icicles keeping safe...i like this much ma'amBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75923763099254671852012-02-06T18:17:50.838-05:002012-02-06T18:17:50.838-05:00Beautiful. Love the ending.Beautiful. Love the ending.BBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09432729957196570774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51933226870045319352012-02-06T16:50:56.785-05:002012-02-06T16:50:56.785-05:00This is truly stunning, Lolamouse. The last four ...This is truly stunning, Lolamouse. The last four lines say so much!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-31805427944715343402012-02-06T16:43:45.956-05:002012-02-06T16:43:45.956-05:00Oh! I never saw the ending coming. That's insp...Oh! I never saw the ending coming. That's inspired. I really like the whole thing. Your roll just continues with this. The tea, the icicles, so atmospheric!<br /><br />Um...I don't suppose I should mention that I sleep with the thermostat set at 52 degrees?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-90285186527956634352012-02-06T16:21:44.119-05:002012-02-06T16:21:44.119-05:00Hola mi romantica! This is beginning to uncover th...Hola mi romantica! This is beginning to uncover the youthful romantic in you. I'm not 'ranting'<br />just curious about this subtle transitioning I'm seeing in your writing. <br /><br />Curious Jorge, :)Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21361358881540645302012-02-06T16:12:41.410-05:002012-02-06T16:12:41.410-05:00OoOoOo I love this, it did chill my bones a little...OoOoOo I love this, it did chill my bones a little though. Not too happy about that, but worth it I guess! :) happy monday !!Hey Monkey Butthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03876011642278169652noreply@blogger.com