tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post1650884999428711642..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: October RainLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-7663880788852786522013-10-17T06:26:02.685-04:002013-10-17T06:26:02.685-04:00So beautiful. I love thisSo beautiful. I love thisnot displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-48945168436983732052013-10-16T16:14:43.937-04:002013-10-16T16:14:43.937-04:00This makes me ache. It's such a beautiful trib...This makes me ache. It's such a beautiful tribute. Your words are such a tremendous gift. I don't think you even realize the magic you create.Crayotic Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13480766951670643937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-17993625823746345902013-10-15T20:20:57.854-04:002013-10-15T20:20:57.854-04:00Rhyming! I'm impressed AND totally enamored ...Rhyming! I'm impressed AND totally enamored with the first two lines. A perfect Autumn poem. Lovely.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-19632729743444042712013-10-15T10:40:27.724-04:002013-10-15T10:40:27.724-04:00Perfect pairing of picture and poem!Perfect pairing of picture and poem!BBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09432729957196570774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-22475225051474016912013-10-14T19:28:16.030-04:002013-10-14T19:28:16.030-04:00the sentiments and form work so well together in y...the sentiments and form work so well together in your write, Lola Mouse ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-2242797050774482712013-10-14T09:16:38.607-04:002013-10-14T09:16:38.607-04:00This is a lovely poem, LM. There is a wonderful li...This is a lovely poem, LM. There is a wonderful lilting quality created by the repetition and the rhyme.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52607839593306409492013-10-14T08:45:47.273-04:002013-10-14T08:45:47.273-04:00beautifully looped poem.beautifully looped poem.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-45524387438071835992013-10-14T06:45:40.252-04:002013-10-14T06:45:40.252-04:00First of love, love the autumn theme, full of rem...First of love, love the autumn theme, full of remembrance & nostalgia ~ Then the excellent choice of words for repetition (bleed/leaves/shades) ~ You have also used the rhyming scheme for the looping verses ~ A fine example of this form LM ~<br /><br />Thanks for linking up with Sunday's Challenge & wishing you happy week ahead ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-41057756876128264382013-10-14T01:15:07.058-04:002013-10-14T01:15:07.058-04:00This is wonderful, Ms Mouse. You chose to repeat w...This is wonderful, Ms Mouse. You chose to repeat words that had different meanings, so the repetition wasn't what the reader noticed, only the depth and meaning of your words.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86170865631781021982013-10-14T01:05:02.446-04:002013-10-14T01:05:02.446-04:00I too love the beauty and fond remembrance embrace...I too love the beauty and fond remembrance embraced in your verse~<br />well doneEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-60455652163189788052013-10-13T22:27:29.990-04:002013-10-13T22:27:29.990-04:00This is very beautiful, Lolamouse, and is in synch...This is very beautiful, Lolamouse, and is in synch with what we have all been thinking this week. I especially love <br />"her brown eyes when she grieves". I can see them.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com