tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post1607577740134145149..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: The CircusLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-79958036381229229462011-06-17T22:45:23.610-04:002011-06-17T22:45:23.610-04:00There you are, lolamouse! I can imagine you there...There you are, lolamouse! I can imagine you there at the circus, caught unawares with emotion. Very easy to connect with your experience, the way you've written it. Nice work.<br /><br />My entry is at: http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2011/06/17/in-search-of-time-space-and-place-to-stand/Elaine Danforthhttp://elainedanforth.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-32559776366484391512011-05-26T22:38:04.690-04:002011-05-26T22:38:04.690-04:00:( *hugs* He wasn't worthy of you, lola! Too b...:( *hugs* He wasn't worthy of you, lola! Too bad you couldn't feed him to those lions. :P I liked this poem but I wish it had a happier ending, my friend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-59778903584860807342011-05-26T10:22:44.810-04:002011-05-26T10:22:44.810-04:00Well this is beautifully written, you use the circ...Well this is beautifully written, you use the circus imagery as a great vehicle - nice writing...Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581519719001748921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-45147970895650999442011-05-26T02:42:06.737-04:002011-05-26T02:42:06.737-04:00It's funny how something can bring back sad me...It's funny how something can bring back sad memories, and the emotional acrobatics of relationships a circus!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-89781979015706966912011-05-25T15:58:42.913-04:002011-05-25T15:58:42.913-04:00Lovely writing...really enjoyed it! :)Lovely writing...really enjoyed it! :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-51891624646907852422011-05-25T08:00:35.467-04:002011-05-25T08:00:35.467-04:00Congratulations on a well-deserved award for this ...Congratulations on a well-deserved award for this one!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-60861654022367223842011-05-24T19:09:23.332-04:002011-05-24T19:09:23.332-04:00When I started reading this, I thought it would be...When I started reading this, I thought it would be upbeat, but as soon as it became clear it wouldn't be, the words opened up wonderfully. You have a lovely grasp of language.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-58574629314059773462011-05-23T00:25:14.142-04:002011-05-23T00:25:14.142-04:00join Jingle Poetry Potluck today,
your input is ...join Jingle Poetry Potluck today, <br /><br />your input is valued,<br />smiles.<br /><br />bless your Monday!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-14881672154562183652011-05-22T23:14:23.041-04:002011-05-22T23:14:23.041-04:00reminds me of the song "Don't Cry Out Lou...reminds me of the song "Don't Cry Out Loud".....<br />we have to learn how to hide our feelings sometimes...<br /><br />love the poem, well-written.....<br />thanks for sharing :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-5500244117454999612011-05-22T19:57:24.555-04:002011-05-22T19:57:24.555-04:00You brought back all the amazement of something hi...You brought back all the amazement of something hitting a nerve. Wonderful writing.Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70642099563978571072011-05-22T14:44:39.853-04:002011-05-22T14:44:39.853-04:00That sometimes little things bring it all back.. c...That sometimes little things bring it all back.. couldn't be any more true!<br /><br />Thoughts jumping a train..? My mind's already racing at this thought!<br /><br />You sure have way with words..<br />Hugs xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-79936580624111015912011-05-21T08:27:35.279-04:002011-05-21T08:27:35.279-04:00A hidden trace of sorrow in it, I feel... yet this...A hidden trace of sorrow in it, I feel... yet this piece if very much about how one slide through in learning to let go and even forgive... :) Another wonderful piece...The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09925137911418305053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-60966305333938992442011-05-21T06:14:02.634-04:002011-05-21T06:14:02.634-04:00So sad, it really touches the heartSo sad, it really touches the heartAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24769992825425345222011-05-21T03:31:59.844-04:002011-05-21T03:31:59.844-04:00I agree with shoelessboywonder in his assessment. ...I agree with shoelessboywonder in his assessment. I too look forward to your future writings.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-32756480803450119432011-05-20T17:34:08.913-04:002011-05-20T17:34:08.913-04:00when i read it i thought i knew how it will go but...when i read it i thought i knew how it will go but you surprised me.........very nicely done......the word play and the play of emotions is quite impressive :)$unshine of the Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06218029621719293041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-90309418424690818442011-05-20T14:41:11.364-04:002011-05-20T14:41:11.364-04:00A wonderful piece of writing and I love the way yo...A wonderful piece of writing and I love the way you try to reconcile with the pain and the descriptions of the circus are so lovely!Butterflies of timehttp://harivarasanam.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-66129439575196968542011-05-20T14:27:39.881-04:002011-05-20T14:27:39.881-04:00Awwww, sad. I am left wondering if this is litera...Awwww, sad. I am left wondering if this is literal or figurative... the crying at the circus. I thought it was a great comparison for the relationship though. <br /><br />On a totally weird semi-related side note... my sister met a bearded woman last night working the pharmacy graveyard shift. She said it was very eerie / circus scary. So... not everyone loves the circus you see. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-85984846918069684382011-05-20T13:58:13.215-04:002011-05-20T13:58:13.215-04:00The pull of the circus. A fabulous write combining...The pull of the circus. A fabulous write combining pain with performance!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21004069414716541672011-05-20T13:23:16.609-04:002011-05-20T13:23:16.609-04:00used to be in the circus show,
loved it.
very sma...used to be in the circus show,<br />loved it.<br /><br />very smart metaphor/sentiments,<br />Thanks for the award acceptance.<br />:)Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21639446160080878282011-05-20T11:59:22.658-04:002011-05-20T11:59:22.658-04:00Wow, need a little work on present and past tense,...Wow, need a little work on present and past tense, but so do i. Over all I love the way you compaired the circus acrobats to a failed relationship truly well done to piece the work together. I am seriously impressed. It was a pleasure to read your writing and I look forward to your future rally posts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-25385638048073677832011-05-20T07:13:30.449-04:002011-05-20T07:13:30.449-04:00nice rhymes :)
Enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.w...nice rhymes :)<br />Enjoy the rally!<br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/a-little-while-longer/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-87879135057073911332011-05-20T03:02:23.797-04:002011-05-20T03:02:23.797-04:00pain hidden in it instantly touches the heart.
be...pain hidden in it instantly touches the heart.<br /><br />beautiful.trishahttp://window2mysoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com