tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post155625495190503621..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Cinquains For a SaturdayLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-86243844647422695162013-02-07T23:32:11.899-05:002013-02-07T23:32:11.899-05:00These are wonderful, Lola. They are easily seen.These are wonderful, Lola. They are easily seen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-79476607372361800282013-02-04T19:26:58.405-05:002013-02-04T19:26:58.405-05:00Saturday we could hear the tree frogs for the firs...Saturday we could hear the tree frogs for the first time this year....I think it's too soon, but what a lovely sound just like your words spoken out loud.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-54249708042078587562013-02-04T02:01:40.139-05:002013-02-04T02:01:40.139-05:00the first one really ends in a surprise! both have...the first one really ends in a surprise! both have such excellent imagery! you definitely know your cinquains, Ms Mouse!<br /><br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-43731112284646293092013-02-03T23:48:29.399-05:002013-02-03T23:48:29.399-05:00Ack! for the butterfly.......I love the noisy bird...Ack! for the butterfly.......I love the noisy birds in the second one though! Such good writing, one sees it clearly. I can even feel the cobwebs!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-33343876845312818112013-02-03T20:43:46.761-05:002013-02-03T20:43:46.761-05:00Change or Die...I love that title. Both cinquain a...Change or Die...I love that title. Both cinquain are gorgeous. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-70049925094149195012013-02-03T11:49:59.937-05:002013-02-03T11:49:59.937-05:00Great job with the title especially on the first o...Great job with the title especially on the first one, LM. Both are structurally intense and pack a punch, but of course, I like the darker one. ;_)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-80360310892859004742013-02-03T10:29:45.518-05:002013-02-03T10:29:45.518-05:00feel like I'm right there in each experience w...feel like I'm right there in each experience with you.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-37513849951281795812013-02-03T08:43:36.747-05:002013-02-03T08:43:36.747-05:00There is something almost Oriental in your present...There is something almost Oriental in your presentation of the natural images within these poems.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-39428786920719292382013-02-03T04:01:21.428-05:002013-02-03T04:01:21.428-05:00Beautiful and great use of the form. I don't ...Beautiful and great use of the form. I don't think the butterfly is dead - merely waiting, as we are, for warmth.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-9575576714274762032013-02-03T01:26:23.654-05:002013-02-03T01:26:23.654-05:00vivid images here;)vivid images here;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21507394467295642362013-02-02T21:55:34.924-05:002013-02-02T21:55:34.924-05:00Cinquains for the outdoor enthusiast! Very nice.Cinquains for the outdoor enthusiast! Very nice.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-2632341877473352662013-02-02T21:09:17.073-05:002013-02-02T21:09:17.073-05:00I really enjoyed how vibrant and so vivid, yours a...I really enjoyed how vibrant and so vivid, yours are! Amazing...I could see them both~ I love the photos, too...<br />Yeah, you did add the twist! ;DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-59036635508191538222013-02-02T20:41:25.355-05:002013-02-02T20:41:25.355-05:00These do leave me hanging a bit. Is the butterfly ...These do leave me hanging a bit. Is the butterfly really dead? Did the dog eat the bird? Well done. Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-34566362992189825022013-02-02T19:46:01.191-05:002013-02-02T19:46:01.191-05:00ha. really like your first one...its tight...the s...ha. really like your first one...its tight...the second, easy to see...and i am hoping the bird made it away...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-62372624370752981712013-02-02T19:04:07.072-05:002013-02-02T19:04:07.072-05:00You nicely caught the end twist. Neat!You nicely caught the end twist. Neat!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-57122492086226674652013-02-02T18:51:05.956-05:002013-02-02T18:51:05.956-05:00Very nice indeed, Ms. Mouse. :-)Very nice indeed, Ms. Mouse. :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-58594811206964272032013-02-02T18:50:35.727-05:002013-02-02T18:50:35.727-05:00yes, wow! great snapshots, both. the first is so u...yes, wow! great snapshots, both. the first is so unexpected. at first i giggled because THAT'S a strong title :) but wow, your observation is keen and dark, too. not what you want to find in your doorway. and i love the unexpected last line in the second. great!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-42578397431910267482013-02-02T18:19:45.566-05:002013-02-02T18:19:45.566-05:00I really enjoyed both of these! That first one is...I really enjoyed both of these! That first one is so tight and perfect. The second captures a moment in nature in a way that takes me right there. Love what you did with the form. Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-84342322625412399292013-02-02T18:19:40.188-05:002013-02-02T18:19:40.188-05:00The first one is deadly tight and the second one i...The first one is deadly tight and the second one is filled with nature's charm ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-18726555403863718362013-02-02T18:08:38.592-05:002013-02-02T18:08:38.592-05:00You made it into true nature lines with sounds and...You made it into true nature lines with sounds and sights. Loved the squawks and feathers. Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.com