tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post1365344515898890091..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: Aubade (Morning Song)Lolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-88367181497884874792011-12-23T15:39:01.410-05:002011-12-23T15:39:01.410-05:00Nice!
I remember not EVER wanting to get out of b...Nice! <br />I remember not EVER wanting to get out of bed, because then I'd know what crap my life was. I'm so very happy that feeling is gone. For me, this poem hit that feeling I had, right on the head. I was clearly one of those "less promising" folks, or at least thought I was.<br />Thank goodness for therapy!!!Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-43721304407493807392011-12-23T10:24:28.208-05:002011-12-23T10:24:28.208-05:00That opening line blew me away, and how well each ...That opening line blew me away, and how well each line lead to the conclusion. You have captured a very tired spirit here, one whose self-confidence is at an all time low.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-82866443438629145642011-12-23T10:03:14.764-05:002011-12-23T10:03:14.764-05:00'...the slackers, the alcoholics, the unemploy...'...the slackers, the alcoholics, the unemployed...', you just identified my prosthetic hips and back,my choice of catharsis and my situation. You would lQQk great standing next to me.<br /><br />Feliz Navidad!nenehttp://nene-lifewhispers.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-15606826173623312082011-12-23T09:45:55.287-05:002011-12-23T09:45:55.287-05:00I used to be a morning person, evolved into a nigh...I used to be a morning person, evolved into a night person, and latterly into a sleeping too much of the time person. So I understand very well where you are coming from.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-14096956002449795952011-12-23T09:28:50.227-05:002011-12-23T09:28:50.227-05:00hah, waking with the slackers. i think not so much...hah, waking with the slackers. i think not so much, i mean, not so much slacking. good morning!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-76522854657089282872011-12-23T08:56:13.128-05:002011-12-23T08:56:13.128-05:00The morning is too demanding. Too full of itself ...The morning is too demanding. Too full of itself and smug.<br /><br />You've described it to a tee, as always. Perfect!JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-62695690939905792532011-12-22T20:10:57.863-05:002011-12-22T20:10:57.863-05:00i think this is a feeling that resonates with many...i think this is a feeling that resonates with many that i know...i like the night...i do like greeting the sun i the night is when i usually come alive...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-11785886145828718392011-12-22T18:30:22.084-05:002011-12-22T18:30:22.084-05:00Snooze Bar!
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Snooze Bar!<br /><br />Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Bryan Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01607046468663026271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-39457605949640160572011-12-22T17:14:29.150-05:002011-12-22T17:14:29.150-05:00Ah, Lolamouse, I hear you. A person is either a m...Ah, Lolamouse, I hear you. A person is either a morning person or he/she is not. There are other times of the day / night to shine.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24797439628932497192011-12-22T16:38:48.278-05:002011-12-22T16:38:48.278-05:00I like the poignancy and sadness of your poetry fo...I like the poignancy and sadness of your poetry form.. specially sleeping thru its demanding time...I can identify with this.<br /><br />Happy Holidays ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com